Can You Tell A Story In…

Happy Thursday! Want a new story challenge? Well, here you go:

Can you tell a story in 20 words? You must use the following words somewhere in the story:

  • MOLE
  • JAM
  • KIDNEY

Last week’s prompt was to tell a story in 40 words using the following four words in it somewhere:

  • MURDER
  • CASSETTE
  • TEAR
  • RICE

Here are your fantastic stories:

Trent’s World:

“This tape will self-destruct…”

The cassette flashed then smoldered.

Who would murder the diplomat? There wasn’t a tear at the funeral, so could be anyone.

The radioactive rice pointed to the Russians, but…

I won’t chose to accept this one…

Kim Smyth:

The Wedding

As the bride and groom emerged, the guests threw rice as they headed to the car. A murder of crows flew overhead, as a tear slipped down her face. Ignoring them, she plugged in the cassette and drove.

Ann Edall-Robson:

The sound of rice pouring from the tear in the bag reminded him of his first job, and the music that had played on the vintage cassette player. It was probably the simplest of any murder contact he had taken.

Treehugger:

Blood found on the cassette. Definitely the murder weapon. What had gone wrong between the perfect wedding ceremony, bride in tears and the police examining the hotel room,the groom lying in a pool of blood mingled with grains of rice?

Val Fish:

All she could manage to eat was rice cakes. She’d listen to audiobooks on our old cassette recorder, she loved Midsomer Murders. Then, nearing the end, I would sing to her, hoping she could hear me. ‘Tears on my pillow…’

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23 responses to “Can You Tell A Story In…”

  1. She found herself in a jam. The mole above her navel was changing and she was already in kidney failure.

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    1. Oh, that’s so sad. Very good though!

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  2. He stared at a mole looking like a spot of jam on her chin, while she complained about kidney pain.

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    1. Well done, Darlene. Very good.

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  3. Taste?
    . . .
    Shock! Horror!
    . . .
    Strawberry jam is really minced, raw kidney!
    Or am I making a mountain out a molehill?

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    1. Great response to the prompt 😄

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      1. Thanks Esther. 🙂

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    2. That’s weird. The problems encountered whilst writing and dog-walking in the rain!
      There should be an “of” between “mountain” and “out”.
      I thought something must be wrong when I only counted 19 words!
      I really wanted to add in the word, “YEUCH” at the end.

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      1. I realised there was a missing ‘of’ so I’ve added it in 😊

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      2. Thanks!
        Shame that there was no room left for a “yeuch!” 😀

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  4. The band was beginning to jam the song “The Mole Who Spied Me”, when the bad jelly hit my kidney.

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    1. Excellent, Trent.

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      1. Thanks, Esther. Now I’m going to have to write a song or book with that title…

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  5. Jam it into second gear!
    The mole squinted as he drove,
    Toads kidneys ached, let me drive? He shouted loudly!

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      1. And I used the right words this week!

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  6. The Doc.was in a jam.
    He’d removed the left kidney on the wrong patient ,instead of a facial mole.

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    1. How very unfortunate! Very good 😊

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  7. Munching on toast and jam, she watched a mole digging holes in the kidney shaped pasture. They had to go!

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    1. Brilliant! thanks, Ann.

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