Guest Writer Spot

If you’d like to be included in this slot, please get in touch: estherchilton@gmail.com. Poems can be up to 60 lines and prose 2000 words. If you’d like to add a short bio and photo, then great. All I ask is that there’s nothing offensive.

This week’s guest is a new student of mine and a real inspiration. I’m delighted he’s written something for this slot. Please welcome Barry Watts to my blog this week.

                                                   Spellbound

I am frozen to the spot. I cannot move. The trees are dancing in the night. The elves and pixies dance to the green man who lurks in the branches of the trees.

He tells a story that we must listen to before the cruel wind descends and the rain lashes the trees. They have been uprooted and I can hear the snapping of branches and the tearing of roots.

I am panicking but am in the stillness of the storm that is relentless in its fury.

The green man smiles and I am trapped by a giant web that engulfs me.

The howling wind bites my body, and I submit to its power and feel the warm embrace of fear. I watch as the ground heaves and swells and bursts forth.

The thunder drowns my ears and the lightning seers my eyes.

I crawl into a dark hole and cower in fear, but the green man follows, sits and taunts me. 

There seems to be an eternity of noise and chaos from which I cannot escape and the wind and rain lashes my face. The demons of the storm surround me, the beasts of the earth have been unleashed. They gaze upon their victory.

But soon the dark clouds wither and in their glory flee. I crawl from the dark hole and gaze upon the scene. All is quiet, serene. Hell has been. I walk slowly through the forest. Night is night and day is day and now I can see the forest dance and play.

The green man smiles and walks slowly by my side and the bright moon holds me spellbound.

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About Barry:

I was born in Tunbridge Wells and went to Huntleys Secondary Modern.

When I moved to Walsall with my wife I went to Wolverhampton University as a mature student and graduated with a BA(hons) in Politics and Psychology.

I am now a freelance writer with a diverse career behind me. I am seventy nine years of age (oh dear).

I was in the merchant navy. I have also been a social worker and a swim teacher. I have been married for fifty years, and am a lifelong athlete.

I continue to prioritize fitness exercises daily, whilst managing COPD.

My journey is defined by a deep curiosity about people and a commitment to staying active regardless of the challenge.

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16 responses to “Guest Writer Spot”

  1. Loubythesea61 Avatar
    Loubythesea61

    This is brilliant Barry. I enjoyed it very much. I loved the different form and could feel a parallel between the storm and anxiety/anguish. Would love to read more🙂

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    1. Thank you for commenting, Lou. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

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  2. What an enchanting story from Barry. I enjoyed this short but powerful piece. I see a lot of symbolism in it. Thank you, Esther and Barry.

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    1. Many thanks for your comment, Jan. Much appreciated.

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  3. Great job, Berry. Glad to se a Septuagenarian still kicking it.

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    1. He certainly is. Thanks for the comment, John.

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  4. What an enchanting and compelling story. I love its eerie and whimsical feeling. Beautifully done, Barry.

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    1. Thank you for your comment. I’m glad you enjoyed it 😊

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      1. You’re welcome, Esther.

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    1. Thanks, Dawn 😊

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  5. Wonderful tale and beautiful life. God bless you, Barry.

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    1. Thank you for your comment, Susan. It’ll mean a lot to Barry.

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  6. dutifullydeer6ab803ea0e Avatar
    dutifullydeer6ab803ea0e

    Hello Esther,

    Welcome to Barry Watts and thankyou for “Spellbound”.

    I’d be pleased to be a Guest Writer, and propose this poem as a kind of biog:

    LIFE CHOICE I don’t iron any more – it’s a chore. I buy just what I need from a store, and I never log on – it’s a bore, so I don’t know what Bluetooth is for. But the summer is sweet as I walk down the street, and the birds sing the same as before.

    I need no fancy gizmo to cook and I get what I need from a book. To check on the weather, I look. My flowers grow from cuttings I took. But life is as wide as the colours inside a rainbow of light on the brook.

    My friends are all people I know, I believe you will reap what you sow, and after a “high”, there’s a “low”. The best stone is one you don’t throw. When the clouds sweep the sky I’m convinced I know why we are free to enjoy life’s great show.

    Best regards, Susan

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    1. Hi Susan, this is super. Thank you very much – I enjoyed it. I’ll schedule you in for Friday 1st May.

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