Can You Tell A Story In…

I hope you’re having a great week. It’s now time for your new story challenge. Can you tell a story in 52 words using the following words in it somewhere:

  • PIROUETTE
  • COMIC
  • EGG
  • WRESTLER
  • SYLLABLE

The previous challenge was to write a story in 38 words using the following four words in it somewhere:

  • CHAMPAGNE
  • TOWER
  • OVERDRAWN
  • DIPLOMA

Here are your very clever stories:

Darlene:

Despite her account being overdrawn, she purchased a bottle of expensive champagne. Taking it up to the top of the tower, she removed her diploma from the envelope, popped the cork and drank a toast. Well done me!

Therapy Bits:

At graduation night, her diploma trembled as the champagne tower collapsed, applause turning to laughter; by morning, celebration faded, accounts were overdrawn, yet she smiled, knowing beginnings wobble before they rise, and perseverance builds steadier towers tomorrow anyway.

Kim Smyth:

I cared not that my account was overdrawn as I went to the tower to sip champagne in celebration of getting my diploma. Luckily, I managed a glass before it was discovered that I had no money left!

Life Lessons:

A Simple Solution

There is a simple solution to every problem. Now he would prove it. With champagne tastes on an overdrawn bank account and a college diploma just a dream, he stepped to the edge of the tower and jumped.

Scrambled, Not Fried:

Dem Wuz Da Days

It’s all over.

Despite my (PhD) diploma, and even though I’m sipping my (last) glass of champagne in my luxurious tower home, my account’s overdrawn and I can’t even afford to write a story in exactly 38 words.

A Jeanne in the Kitchen:

As she stood on top of the tower with her diploma in one hand and a glass of champagne in the other, it suddenly hit her that her bank account was beyond overdrawn and there was no money.

Blind Wilderness:

Ralph was a tower of strength to Cheryl with her champagne couloured hair. He even got overdrawn at the bank to help pay for her diploma. He didn’t know Cheryl was going out with Tom behind his back.

Rohini:

Overdrawn, Overdressed, Overeducated

At graduation, my overdrawn wallet toasted champagne dreams atop a tower of regrets; the diploma smiled, knowing success begins when humor survives debt, gravity, and relatives applauding the wrong person while I bowed, confetti fell, pants split, oops.

Sillyfrog’s Blog:

Purchasing Pride

The Ivory Tower most certainly has turned champagne colored. Only the wealthiest elites are able to buy a diploma. Degrees have no value to most but for ruining their credit for life and keeping their accounts perpetually overdrawn.

Author Jan Sikes:

Safely tucked away in the hotel’s finest tower suite, the new bride and groom sipped champagne from gold-trimmed flutes, while staring at the groom’s newly acquired diploma from Harvard University. Alas, if only their bank account wasn’t overdrawn. Well, that was fun!

The Bag Lady:

Standing on the tower edge atop his building, poured the champagne over his diploma, realizing it was only a worthless piece of paper. His job was gone, his family gone, accounts overdrawn, so stepping off, he was too.

Wilfred Leahy:

I had only received my diploma yesterday but here I am standing look up at the tower block.

Entering the penthouse, there on the table a glass of champagne and a cheque for my overdrawn bank account. “WHO?”

Graeme Sandford:

It was Posh Day at Oil-Drum Lane,

Albert had arranged the Champagne Tower (going overdrawn in the process), and Harold was counting… the cost. 

It took no Diplomat to work out that things could only go terribly wrong. 

Susan Batten:

I nearly choked on my champagne when I saw how much I was overdrawn. They’d awarded me a diploma for my Tower Complex design, but as yet they hadn’t paid me a bean.

Pensitivity101:

In studying for her diploma in economics, it was ironic she was well overdrawn at the bank, but she didn’t care.

Champagne flowed like water down the tower of glasses as she toasted her success with her family.

Murray Clarke:

Having successfully achieved her Wedding Planner Diploma, Sheila began to design a stunning Champagne Tower, with sparkling wine overflowing into the tiers below – a costly affair, guaranteed to cause the bride’s father to become overdrawn at the bank.

The Afterlove Voice:

Overdrawn at the bank and restless, she climbed the old tower at sunrise clutching her diploma. A stranger popped champagne, celebrating an unplanned reunion. Between laughter and bubbles, debts seemed trivial, dreams rekindled by fresh air and unexpected joy.

Pictures Imperfect Blog:

A Diploma Regained

The tower was surrounded by a moat allowing access only via a hopelessly overdrawn drawbridge. “Champagne! ” hollered the guard dangling off the railing inside the wrong side of the gate. He had just revived his suspended diploma!

Nicola Daly:

I signed up to do that diploma course where you turn empty bottles into a model of the Tower of London. Only problem? I chose champagne. And now I’m overdrawn. That’s not my only headache – pass the Alka-Seltzer.

Annika Perry:

‘I’m overdrawn,’ Lily exclaimed at the atm machine, her new diploma in her hand. 

‘I’m skint! What about the celebrations?’

 ‘This way,’ said Rosie, dragging them into a wedding nearby, picking glasses from the tower of champagne! 

‘Cheers!’

Christine Mallaband-brown:

I was in the Champagne region of France when I saw the tower. I got my sketchbook and used an overdrawn technique. This would be good for my art diploma, it made a great illustration the landscape thesis entry.

Teleportingweena:

The bartender’s diploma said he was a master at mixing drinks. However, his specialty was stacking full champagne glasses into a tower. The crowd cheered him on, but he was overdrawn by one glass. Splash! Down they fell.

Richmond Road:

Living alone in an ivory tower
Gold-plated toilet
Champagne shower
Awards on wall. Fake diploma
Winter is in Athens. Summer in Roma.
Overdrawn at the bank
Find it funny
With passion in the tank
And Daddy with money

Lily’s Corner:

Starting Today

An overdrawn bank account, a champagne-coloured dress and matching heels that made Jill tower over her classmates are all that’s left from her graduation. Today marks the day she puts her diploma in business finance to good use.

The Elephant’s Trunk:

High in Dubai

Axl’s film school diploma promised Hollywood glory.

His debut: King Kong climbing Burj Khalifa while balancing a champagne tower.

The ape costume rental left him overdrawn.

Critics called the movie “abysmal”.

Still, it got more views than “Cats”!

Ann Edall-Robson:

The winning Rural Words Diploma had gone to a city dweller. A contradiction in his mind, or had his overdrawn expectations failed him. With an unsteady swat, the tower of submission papers toppled over. Champagne could fix anything. 

L wie:

To Stand Out Can be Nice or Painful

Once again his gestures were overdrawn: Smashing the magnum bottle of champagne on the dance floor to celebrate his diploma was stupid and sadly showed that the giant, big as a tower, still did not fit into dwarfland.

Treehugger:

Having studied hard for my diploma. I had achieved my dream and the champagne flowed. My parents had been a tower of strength and now I had to admit to them that I was overdrawn at the bank.

Squirreljan:

So, I’m a traitor. Well, I’ve got a diploma in it so I must be. Forget the champagne and the last supper. Just lead me to the block in the Tower and don’t let the process become overdrawn.

poetisinta:

Celebraciones!

A lad got his Art diploma in Spain,

he wanted to toast his success with champagne,

But alas he was overdrawn,

All his money was gone,

To the rescue, came his mum a tower of strength – once again!

Utahan15:

towering champagne

lions with their pride s mane

overdrawn on the fear and emotion

the king rex rey

both tomorrow and today

gets the diploma for ruling

fast and furious

true and also spurrious!

***

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56 responses to “Can You Tell A Story In…”

  1. the comic wrestler

    is a not a serious nestler

    as they piroutte

    the audience no greek chorus

    eggs him them on

    with multi syllables

    of pin up and pin him

    end it

    and the champion

    will go the what is left

    of the white house

    on july four for number two hundred and fifty!

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  3. mood performance art

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    1. Thanks for your comment, Beth 😊

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    nikidaly70

    Sidney Syllable read his comic while he tucked into an egg sandwich. His favourite story was the one about Ringo the Sumo Wrestler who fell in love with a ballerina. Afterwards he went to practise his pirouettes. If Ringo could woo a ballerina by learning how to pirouette, then so could he!

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    1. You left me with a big smile 😊

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        nikidaly70

        Glad you liked it. Happy Thursday 🙂

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  5. His documents state his profession as “comic wrestler”. What it means is that he performs in pink tights and a tutu between the professional wrestling bouts. He pirouettes on stage, then screams a single syllable, something like “Knoutsh!” or “Brang!”, and ends up with egg on his face. Dada is an armadillo!

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    1. That’s so funny!

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      1. 😁 I’m happy if that is the effect.

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  7. The wrestler held an egg in one hand and a stand-up comic under his arm while doing a pirouette and reciting a seventeen syllable haiku. No one clapped.

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    1. I’m not surprised 😂

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  9. Thanks for the fun prompt words! Here is my entry:

    https://wp.me/p3RE1e-nCG

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  10. At dawn, a comic wrestler practiced in the gym. Each pirouette became an inside joke and every move a new syllable in his silent language. He broke his fast with a single egg, reflecting on the absurdity of grace and strength. That morning, laughter and muscle danced together, rewriting what was possible.

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    1. That’s such a good story! Thank you 🥰

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      1. Aww thank you

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    1. I really enjoyed it 😊

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  12. The wrestler downed his glass of liquid egg while reading a comic in the Saturday Evening Post. He got his protein by drinking raw eggs and eating a carnivore diet. Tonight, he would be in the ring with a woman. It will be interesting to see who will pirouette first! Not him!

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    1. Just realized I left out syllable 🤪

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      1. Oh no! But it was an entertaining story regardless 😊

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      2. Thanks! 😊

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    dutifullydeer6ab803ea0e

    Hello Esther,

    Here’s my ‘story-in’ effort this morning, not very polished, sorry, but there’s lots to do today.

    “At the summer Wordquest Fest, we were entertained by jugglers, fire-eaters etc… After the talk on “Gendre”, an egg-wrestler put on a show with pirouettes for comic relief before we tackled the serious stuff in “Syllable”.”

    Howzat?

    Best wishes,

    Susan ________________________________

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    1. Great! I’m glad you could find time for it, Susan.

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  14. PIROUETTE for me, said the artist, I want to add a super ballerina character to my fantasy COMIC.
    She will be up against the EGG a
    WRESTLER with a name of one
    SYLLABLE. She danced a fandango instead and he was so impressed that he started work immediately. Rave reviews soon followed…

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    1. That’s a funny story. Thanks, Christine.

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    squirreljan

    “How many syllables does it take to make a pirouette?” The comic twirled around three times. “Three, get it, ha ha.” He ducked as the eggs flew at him.

    Later that night he flexed his muscles in the shower, washing the debris off. “Mum was right. I should have been a wrestler.”

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    1. Excellent story, Janice!

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    1. I’m so glad you enjoyed it 😊

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  17. He dreaded hearing the one syllable command from the ring master .

    Turn ,Turn, Turn .

    Hercules had been employed as a comic wrestler in the circus ,but to earn more money he was made to dress up in a pink tutu outfit and balance on an egg shaped ball and perform several pirouettes .

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    1. That would be a sight to see!

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    Broadway critic, A. Syllable was brutal in his review of The Pirouette at Wrestler Lane. 

    “Everyone involved has egg on their faces for their effort in making a murder mystery into a musical about a standup comic and a troupe of aging dancers. This one gets a firm single syllable rating — Flop!”

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    1. You made me smile with that, Ann 🥰

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    Rose Thorn

    “Love at first sight”

    Before she could utter a syllable, she realized she had egg on her face. It was comic how she had tried to act like a wrestler by tackling him. Instead, she had done a clumsy pirouette, nearly ending up on the floor. “Hey, whoa!”, he said, steadying her, before their eyes met.

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    1. Thank you for joining in. A fun story 😊

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        Rose Thorn

        Thanks! Glad you think so. I thought about re-titling this “Meet cute”.

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      2. That would work!

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  21. Petit clown,

    Une pirouette lente dans la tête
    Un sourire comique pour tenir debout
    Un œuf fragile dans la poitrine.
    Le lutteur avance sans bruit
    Chaque syllabe tombe juste, simple, nue.
    Rien d’héroïque, seulement marcher, respirer, regarder le monde passer, et rester là, vivant, malgré tout, sans fracas…

    Bon dimanche Esther.

    Tony

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    1. Ravi de vous revoir, Tony!

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      1. For sure, Esther !
        We don’t forget the people we appreciate.
        A bientôt.

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