Can You Tell A Story In…

It’s Thursday and so I have a new story challenge for you.

Can you tell a story in 50 words using the following words in it somewhere:

  • POEM
  • CRITIQUE
  • MURDER
  • CUPCAKE
  • DICE

Last week’s challenge was to write a story in 41 words using the following four words in it somewhere:

  • PETRIFIED
  • HEPTATHLON
  • UMBRELLA
  • CRAYON

Here are your entertaining stories:

Christopher Farley:

As I stepped out from under my umbrella, the downpour worsened. I just stood, petrified. The next event of the heptathlon was the javelin. In this weather I wouldn’t even trust myself to launch a crayon, let alone a dangerous spear.

Frank Hubeny:

Tom clicked his crayon which opened the translucent umbrella.

This was the third day it rained petrified heptathlon.

The colors were beautiful.

Trent’s World:

Gena stared at the hurdles, petrified.  Coach talked her into the heptathlon but never mentioned hurdles.  So that’s what the crayon scribble covered!

She felt a drop.  Coach raced out with an umbrella as the rain hit.

“The event’s cancelled.”

Saved!

Help From Heaven:

Fear of Losing Leads to Defeat

Grace was petrified by Camilla’s dominance in the 800m run of the heptathlon. Watching Camilla holding an umbrella with the colors of a box of Crayola crayons, Grace prayed that, for once, she could overcome her fears and win the event.

Graeme Sandford:

As a sports reporter, I drew a picture, with wax crayons, of the heptathlon I was attending. It was so wet I drew competitors carrying umbrellas in the events. I was petrified that the high-jump would look farcical, but it worked.

Nicola Daly:

Remind me not to eat crayons before bedtime. I had this awful dream where I was running through the Petrified Forest carrying an umbrella in a heptathlon. And the weird thing, was I was wearing lime-green Lycra. SOOOOO not my colour.

D. Wallace Peach:

I was petrified of the roiling clouds and distant thunder, but quitting the heptathlon wasn’t an option. A raindrop hit my forehead. While spectators opened umbrellas, a child raised her crayoned sign: When life gives you rain, run in the puddles.

Annette Rochelle-Aben:

Hearts and Hands

Seven kindergarteners were petrified they wouldn’t finish decorating their teacher’s paper umbrella before recess was over. Each, armed with a different color crayon, they undertook what could only be described as a heptathlon of creativity, in time to say, Happy Birthday!

Kim Smyth:

Holding a petrified rock in one hand and my umbrella in the other, I was on my way to the heptathlon to give my favorite runner a rock for good luck. On it, I’d drawn a clover leaf in green crayon.

Tessa:

LuAnne was petrified that her mother would be mad at her for using her crayons to color all over the walls, losing her umbrella as well.

Her sister, JoyAnne, was participating in seven different athletic events in the heptathlon that afternoon.

My Mind Mappings:

Petrified beneath sudden thunder, Brenda clutched the small umbrella like armor. The heptathlon still awaited, rain-soaked lanes gleaming. Her daughter, handing her a blue crayon, whispered, “Draw courage, Mama.”

Brenda smiled through tears, heart steady, sprinting forward into storm and glory.

Squirreljan:

Soaring over hurdles and high jump, dodging shot put and javelin, running 200 metres, leaping across the river, running 800 metres. Heptathlon in extremis. Petrified it was lost forever, my waterfall of tears uncovered a crayoned arrow pointing towards … my umbrella.   

Pensitivity101:

She was petrified, having no idea why she should be a heptathlon participant.

She suddenly awoke to see her two year old trying to eat his crayons.

She reached for her martini with the dainty umbrella and took an undainty slug. 

Rall:

lost her nerve
petrified all of a sudden
heptathlon!
what was she thinking
too late now
the fans holding up
placards with crayon slogans
the whistle blower ‘s in position
Eureka!!!!
Saved by the looney
who attacked the whistle blower
with an umbrella

Murray Clarke:

Esther struggled editing her latest Saffy book, but had foolishly promised her daughter she’d participate in the local heptathlon – carrying a green dragon umbrella! Petrified, she put down the crayon she’d been using, and poured herself a large glass of wine.

iMartist:

Missing Since Oct 31st: Sheila and Steve Panchini

You can endure a heptathlon, but I ask you to spend time with me in a spook house; you’re petrified?

She points at where we hung our umbrellas and in blood red crayon it says “ENJOY BEING DEAD, SHEILA AND STEVE.”

L Wie:

Not Everybody Enjoys a Rainbow

The little boy took a pencil and drew a grey cloud and a black umbrella. “It’s a heptathlon. You also must use the watercolors and the crayons and …”

The child stood petrified in front of the friendly lady: “But I’m colourblind!”

Christine Mallaband-brown:

Last time I did the heptathlon I was petrified by the thunder. I spent several hours under an umbrella and when they tried to tot up the scores the board burnt out so they had to use crayons.

What a disaster!

showtunessal:

“Tom?” Petrified! My heart felt like I just completed a heptathlon. He looked the same except for the pepper gray hair and beard.

“Remember that note you gave me written in crayon?” he asked. “The poem about the magic umbrella?”

“Yes.”

Silly Frog’s Blog:

The Champ

Most would be petrified when charged by a Pitbull, but not Tiny. That umbrella-like vicious reputation couldn’t rival a Chihuahua’s maneuverability. The heptathlon was on!

Tiny got away!

Having witnessed it all, his boy fashioned him a crayon written medal: Champion.

John W. Howell:

Jane was petrified before the first event of the heptathlon. The lemonade, sun umbrella and crayon box did nothing to boost her confidence. She decided not to participate in the race, but her crayon art took first place at the fair.

Let’s Write:

It’s All in the Mind

Petrified heptathlon officials found Clarissa behind a huge umbrella, clutching a crayon, drawing hurdles. She explained, ‘I have to realise the win in my own mind.’ Off she sprinted, crossing the winning line, and acquired a gold medal – for creativity.

Lily’s Corner:

Late!

It was exam day and I was late! I felt like an athlete in a heptathlon. Jumping over puddles with my umbrella for balance. I finally made it! I jogged to the classroom and pulled out my crayon, ready, but petrified.

my word (s):

Know it All

“Ah, it’s a petrified finger. Keep that umbrella still DS Thomas.”

Since DI Owens had come first in the police heptathlon, he was even more pompous. “Or a child’s crayon. See, it says Crayola?” The DS smirked to herself.

Ann Edall-Robson:

Petrified wood pieces, each the size of a crayon, sat in tubs on the seven tables inside the umbrella tent. No talking was allowed once the Silent Heptathlon Puzzle Games started. Using sign language, the winning team finished in record time.

Miriam Hurdle:

Martha was petrified about the rainstorm on Sunday, the day she’d be in the heptathlon. Her little sister handed her a crayoned umbrella hat. “This magic hat shields the raindrops from your face and eyes. You can do it. Don’t worry.”

Treehugger:

Someone had put up a poster in the Olympic Village. A crude affair, written in crayon. Sophie grimaced. She was forecast last. She was petrified of spoiling her hair during the heptathlon event, and carried an umbrella for the 200 metres sprint.

Poetry By Rene:

Every week is a heptathlon

(with NO option to decline 7-days of challenges):

if it rains, I’ve surely misplaced umbrella;

Sun’s petrified to rise on gone-crazy world;

and I’ve lost ‘special crayon for marking

off each day on calendar…serious bummer!

Margaret G. Hanna:

I waited my turn for the next event — shot put — in the heptathalon. I was petrified. What if my competition number, scrawled illegibly with red crayon, got smudged?

My granddaughter handed me the orange. “Okay, Grandma. Throw it in the umbrella!”

The Elephant’s Trunk:

When storm clouds gathered overhead during the heptathlon, Brunhilde felt uncharacteristically petrified. She grabbed a nearby umbrella but it was no match for the deluge. Desperate, she drew a makeshift shelter with her trusty crayon, but alas, it was too small.

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57 responses to “Can You Tell A Story In…”

  1. a poem

    this tome

    has a home

    killin murder done in

    slim slope

    chocolate cupcake i hope

    your critique is in line

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    nikidaly70

    ‘I’m going to murder that bloody woman. “Critique” she calls it. Says my limerick isn’t a “proper” poem. Can’t be included in her precious anthology. Just wait, I’ll dice her bloody anthology into little cubes. See how she likes that. Pass me a cupcake, love. That’s right, the chocolate one.

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    1. You made me laugh with that. Autobiographical again 🤣🤣🤣

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        nikidaly70

        🤐
        I wouldn’t care to comment. 🤣

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    Kate in Cornwall

    Lady Ursula Plaid-Cardigan seethed as she read Penelope Pratt’s critique of her poem, ‘Ode to a Cupcake’.

    ‘More painful than childbirth and equally as messy’, the art critic opined.

    “Vilify my verse and you dice with death,” snarled Ursula, grabbing her phone.

    Police are describing Pratt’s vicious murder as ‘professional’.

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    1. Fantastic story in 50!

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        Kate in Cornwall

        Thank you! I enjoyed writing it 🧁

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    2. This is a gem. Well done!

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        Kate in Cornwall

        Thank you so much!

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  4. Choo Choo Mama: Roll the dice my little cupcake and I’ll recite a poem for you. If it comes up snake eyes you can give the poem a critique. But if it comes up with boxcars, I guess I’ll just have to murder you. That’s how my literary train rolls. 

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  5. I was writing a poem that I expected would be critiqued by the editor later. Boy, I’d like to murder her sometimes t thought as I munched on a cupcake. I’m rolling the dice that what I’ll get in the mail is another rejection letter. But that’s just my luck!

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    1. That’s such a clever story, Kim.

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  7. When he appeared before a panel of judges for a critique of his poem, the gangster-looking guy reached into his breast pocket for a cupcake. The gesture was taken as a threat. No one wanted to roll the dice that a bad word wouldn’t mean murder.

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    1. Cleverly crafted, John.

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      1. Thank you, Esther.

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    1. I really enjoy it 🤗

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  10. Her cupcake critique was marvellous. According to the TV chef Paul Hollywood it was a delightful poem of cherry and bitter lemon. She was rewarded with a ‘Hollywood handshake’.
    Unfortunately the other contestants did not approve. She was dicing with death and she was drowned in murderous creme pat sauce.

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    1. That is absolutely brilliant! Love it ❤️❤️

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  14. Jo remembered murderously critiquing to find the right words. She rolled the dice while munching a cupcake and considered not giving him the poem. They were only 13.

    Umbrella
    Under the Umbrella with YOU
    Skies are always Blue.
    My first kiss under the Dome
    You promised you’d always be True.

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    1. This is great! Thank you for joining in.

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  15. “OK, listen cupcake. My agent showed me the newspaper. I think you’d better get back to your typewriter and do something about that critique, or change your job. I never said I was Dylan Thomas but to murder my poem like that and expect me to take it? No dice.”

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      1. Thank you, Ess!🤗💐

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  17. it’s the roll of the dice if the critique is favourable or not
    They steal my poems anyway so they must be OK
    I found one of them in a book called The Cupcake Murder
    a story about a psycho who killed his mother because she didn’t put
    icing on it

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    1. A dark tale. Love it!

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  18. Not a murder-mystery
    Not a real poem
    Not for rhythm, not for rhyme
    No plot-twists here to throw ‘em
    Just a little cupcake
    Not naughty, maybe nice
    Literary gamble
    Played with loaded dice
    Hardly an original.
    Don’t think it’s unique
    Please feel free to read it
    But thank-you. No critique.

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    1. Very nicely done, Mr Richmond.

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  19. My attempt at a poem ,

    The bake of her cupcake,

    Unfortunately made my jaws ache.

    But expressing my critique,

    Made my outlook very bleak.

    So with death I did dice,

    As she hurled the block of ice.

    With my murder in her mind,

    A safe refuge I needed to find .

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    1. I love that style for the prompt, Sheila 😊

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      1. Thankyou Esther

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    1. Thank you for your fab story, Nancy 🥰

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  21. Dr. Cupcake tossed the ornate dice across the table. The result would guide his decision whether to destroy or keep the notes linked to his latest poem. Someone in the writing critique group was more than determined that he was guilty of the murder he had written about. Snake Eyes!

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    1. An entertaining story, Ann 🥰

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