Can You Tell A Story In…

Are you ready for your next story challenge? Here are your new words…

Can you tell a story in 57 words using the following words in it somewhere:

  • GAG
  • CLIMB
  • THRILLER
  • FUSSY
  • SCORPIO
  • TOMBOLA

Last week’s challenge was to write a story in 44 words using the following words in it somewhere:

  • TRIATHLON
  • DOLPHIN
  • STYLISH
  • ARISTOCRAT
  • TOFFEE

Here are your fabulous stories:

Therapy Bits:

At dawn, a stylish aristocrat prepared for the triathlon. He swam beside a playful dolphin, biked through misty hills, and ran past cheering crowds. At the finish line, he smiled, unwrapped a toffee, and whispered, “Even nobles need a sweet victory sometimes.”

Nicola Daly:

‘Who does he think he is turning up in that getup to give out the prizes for the triathlon?’

‘That’s Lord Ponsypants, some jumped-up toffee-nosed aristocrat. Blah.’

‘Well, he could at least have worn something a bit more stylish instead of that dolphin costume.’

Kim Smyth:

The stylish aristocrat loved her toffee flavored coffee. She drank it on the way to observe the triathlon in London. Once there, she expected to see glistening men playing all manner of sports, but instead was treated to some kind of dolphin circus show!

Kate in Cornwall:

Stylish aristocrat, Lord Dolphin of Gloomrae, chomped his way to victory in the ‘Gloomy’ Estate Games Triathlon. His bubble-gum bubble was massive, his fizzy-pop burp raucous; but his elegant mastication of the yard of toffee secured the trophy, and hearts of his loyal serfs.

My word(s):

“I did the triathlon dressed as a diamond encrusted dolphin,” George said.

“Stylish.” Trenton sneered.

“Toffee-nosed aristocratic. What’ve you ever done?”

“Me? I drove the Roller eighty times round Papa’s estate in the buff.”

“For charity?”

“Don’t be vulgar, George. I was drunk.”

Trent’s World:

“I run like a gazelle, swim like a dolphin, but ride like I’m spinning in toffee.”

His clothing was more stylish than practical.

“Don’t let the aristocrat fool you, he won his last triathlon,” the guy to my right said.

I nodded, determination strengthening.

Lisa Paul:

Gwendolyn, a wealthy aristocrat, loved to dress stylishly and sit on her yacht, drinking vintage wine and eating toffee. She had no desire to engage in physical competitions, like her husband, who was in a triathlon that day. She wanted to watch the dolphins.

Mom with a blog:

The International Stylish Aristocratic Dolphin Society, poised for their annual toffee tasting, were disheartened: whales beached themselves on platforms used to keep toffee dry, and mollusks that agreed to perform dining service hadn’t finished their Fourth of July triathlon. That began six days ago…

Murray Clarke:

Sir Cedric Carlton-Smyth is the most quintessentially stylish, toffee-nosed aristocrat you could possibly ever meet. Known throughout the county for his wicked, sardonic sense of humour, Sir Cedric is extremely fit, and loves participating in triathlons – where his speciality is swimming with bottlenosed dolphins.

Graeme Sandford:

The stylish and benevolent toffee aristocrat, Lord Toffington-Toff, built a village for his employees. ‘Toffington’ had all the amenities one could wish for – if one liked triathlons… or dolphins. 

Sadly, it fell into the sea, sank, and became an underwater playground for the fishes. 

My Mind Mappings:

The stylish aristocrat dove into the triathlon’s final leg, outpacing swimmers with the grace of a dolphin. Onshore, he peeled off his wetsuit, revealing a tuxedo beneath. “Victory is mine!” he declared, unwrapping a toffee. “And dessert.” Cameras flashed. Nobility never looked so absurd.

Ange:

Dashing Dandy

A stylish aristocrat, in triathlon gear, splashed into the sea. An elegant dolphin approached, his sleek body sliced through the water in front of him, giving the athlete extra speed. Later, he savoured a sweet toffee liqueur, a post-race treat, in the winner’s lounge.

John W. Howell:

Jake, the aristocrat, in a stylish swimming suit with a picture of a dolphin on one leg, wants to be triathlete number one. His participation is dictated by losing to Aunt Maud in her annual toffee pull. He must avenge his disgrace.

Pensitivity101:

The aristocrat had delusions of grandeur, and suggested a water triathlon in the newly opened Dolphin pool.

The lanes were marked off with dainty baubles in an attempt to appear stylish and chic, but in truth they resembled toffee squares floating in blue liquid.

Annette Rochelle Aben:

 The Society Section of the Fashion News featured the stylish aristocrat daintily sipping a toffee latte while surrounded by the paparazzi attempting to capture a full-face photo.

Of course, the clever chap who scored that shot had attended the dolphin triathlon many times before.

Help from Heaven:

Moving like a dolphin, Bruce outpaced the field in his toffee-colored swimming pants. His stylish bike was very fast, but he needed a good head start on the second leg if he were to uphold the family’s honor as the aristocrats of the triathlon.

Stine Writing:

Diana Dolphin was best at the water portion of the triathlon. She wore a stylish swimsuit, fit for an aristocrat, in a soft, toffee color. Jenna Giraffe ran the race and Marissa Monkey rode the bike. They were quite the team.

Richmond Road:

Robert, an aristocrat
Feeding toffee to a cat
Which cat had set its heart upon
Entering triathlon
Swim like dolphin, run like horse
Ride a bike quite fast, of course
This stylish idea left his head
So the cat just went to bed instead

Christine Mallaband-brown:

Triathlon winner Hugh Toffee was walking on the sea front when he saw a beached dolphin. The stylish aristocrat jumped onto the sand, ran over and dragged it back into the waves. ‘Just needed my bike and it would have been a training session’ !

Tessa:

Watching the triathlon, the stylish aristocrat popped a toffee into his mouth. He was in a hurry to make it to “Sea World,” and watch the dolphin show. He wished they would hurry up and cross the finish line. Hurry up, he yelled loudly.

L Wie:

Mother and son

She was watching the dolphin in the aquarium of her castle. Sucking on a toffee, she remembered the time her son competed in a triathlon, but hardly stylish, got a cramp in the cold water. Crying like a baby, unworthy of an aristocrat. Embarrassing!

Sanny M:

The toffee nosed aristocrat loved to take part in the annual triathlon in the village of Lower Sidebottom. However, his normal stylish Kevin Klein t-shirt was in the wash so he had to resort to wearing his Flipper the dolphin vest top instead.

The Bag Lady:

Being nervous for the start in the ocean, Sue breathed deeply. Her first triathlon and she completed the first two rounds easily. Her aristocrat mother, looking rich and stylish in toffee colored clothing, smiled to her mate. “She swims like a dolphin, she’ll win!”

Dawgy Daddy Responds:

The toffee smoked dolphin was a stylish refection only an aristocrat would serve at a triathlon. When I told Sam this would get better with age, it occurred to me her voice rose an octave proclaiming me an outcast to the crowd in attendance.

Ann Edall-Robson:

The Stylish Chocolatier’s weekly advertisement appeared under the newspaper’s triathlon poster. 

The dolphin framed ad read: Closed until further notice. Main supplier raided by police. The aristocrat who paid in full for our exclusive secret ingredient toffee, should not contact us for a refund. 

Christopher Farley:

It was obvious the dolphin would win the triathlon. How could he not receive top marks for the takeoff, elevation and entry into the water? A real water-bound aristocrat if ever there was one. He stuck to the water like toffee to a shoe.

Marsha Ingrao:

The 1928 filming crew was filming the state’s first triathlon outside Orlando, FL. A stylish dolphin tipped his fin at the lady aristocrat wearing the toffee-colored hat and veil standing on the bank’s edge. She kissed the winner and winked flirtatiously at the dolphin.

The Elephant’s Trunk:

After the grueling triathlon event, the exclusive Aristocrat Sports Club on the North Fork of Long Island served its very stylish guests chilled Toffee Vodka Espresso Martinis and freshly-baked butter cookies with toffee bits in the shape of a dolphin carried on silver trays.

Colleen Chesebro:

The triathlon featured George Hampton, a stylish aristocrat from England. During the cycling event, he threw toffee to the onlookers. He never made it to the finish line. He floundered through the swim after losing his breath, and a dolphin helped him to shore.

Doug Jacquier:

When the aristocrat, The Dolphin of France, entered the triathlon, everyone poohpoohed the idea, knowing he couldn’t swim for toffee. His cycling was far from stylish, let alone effective. When it came to bipedal locomotion his only talent was running off at the mouth.

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72 responses to “Can You Tell A Story In…”

  1. So this was the gag. After losing the last round of tombola, he had to climb the rock face while reading some thriller by James Ellroy; I can’t remember which. Anyway, like a typical fussy Scorpio he had no sense of humour and just stood around moaning that the hand-holds were dusted and the ropes all cleaned.

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    1. That’s fab, Chris. Thank you ☺️

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    2. Those fussy Scorpios are legendary 🦂

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    nikidaly70

    There’s this fantastic thriller about a secret agent called 00-27. He’s fastidiously fussy about his gelled hair and white shirts. In his latest exploits he climbs up the side of a skyscraper and catches the baddie called Sidney Scorpio hiding in a tombola drum. 00-27 then gags him with his pristine hanky.

    007 – eat your heart out!

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    1. Love it 😂😂😂

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        nikidaly70

        Thanks 🙂

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  3. The originality of these responses is amazing! Loved reading them.

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    1. So glad you enjoyed them 😊

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    1. Really enjoyed your story 😄

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    Kate in Cornwall

    “Ursula’s doing the tombola.”

    “Fussy old bag. Scorpio, I bet you.”

    “Still need a talent show judge.”

    “Spotty runts dancing to Thriller and an ancient biddy warbling Climb Ev’ry Mountain?”

    “Vicar’s doing his comedy routine.”

    “Folks’d pay to gag him.”

    “Go on, pleeeeease.”

     “Nope. I said I’d open the bloody fete, then I’m off to the pub.”

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    1. a chaotic affair, Kate – sounds like us at The Liskeard Show last week. Grae:)

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    2. Very funny, Kate. Thank you.

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  5. Wonderful responses (and a lot of them) from last week. And some fun ones rolling in! Wild prompts, Esther. Should be a hoot!

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    1. They are such great responses. Lots of fun. Thank you for your comment 🥰

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  6. Little Debbie was a very fussy Scorpio, though she had some ways about her that weren’t quite right. Still the very thought of a public thriller of any sort made her gag. But the fact that the Tarantella Tombola was for a good cause made her climb on board for what became the ride of her life.

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    1. You’ve turned that into a great story!

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      1. 🙏 TY for the fun prompts EC

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    1. That explains a lot 🤣🤣

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  7. […] her “Can You Tell a Story In…” prompt today, Esther Chilton has challenged us to tell a 57-word story using the words gag, […]

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  8. […] Can You Tell A Story In… […]

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    1. That is such a great story. True as well!

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  9. The tombola stopped. The fussy number caller reached in the cage. “Scorpio,” he yelled. Folks were locked in a communal gag, like they had seen this thriller before. “Scorpio, is mine,” a man called out. “You are the first to die. Scorpio.”

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    1. A thriller! Great story, John.

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      1. Thanks, Esther.

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  10. The tombola stopped. The fussy number caller reached in the cage. “Scorpio,” he yelled. Folks were locked in a communal gag, like they had seen this thriller before. “Scorpio, is mine,” a man called out. “You are the first to die. Scorpio. Climb up here.”

    In my previous response the last line was omitted. Here is the correct one

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    1. Thank you for that, John. I was so caught up in it I didn’t notice!

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      1. I don’t know what happened either.

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  11. GAG

    CLIMB

    THRILLER

    She was running the tombola today, she was fussy and wanted really good prizes. A Scorpio mug didn’t really seem good enough.

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  12. Posted too soon! Please delete!

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  13. She was running the tombola today, she was fussy and wanted really good prizes. A Scorpio mug didn’t really seem good enough. She decided to climb upstairs and complain to the official committee. But like a cheap thriller, she ended up gagged, in a cupboard! Would she get out? Or was that the end of Betty’s stall?

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    1. Brilliant! Such a good story from those words ❤️

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    1. I really enjoyed your story. Thank you.

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      1. Thank you. I had to look up the word, tombola. I have never heard that word before. The admissions were fun to read. : )

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  14. […] are the words we have to pack into a 57 word story in Esther Chilton’s Can You Tell A Story In x words-challenge this week. Why not start with some criticism […]

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    1. Really funny – you can’t beat a tombola 😂

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  15. […] her “Can You Tell a Story In…” prompt today, Esther Chilton has challenged us to tell a 57-word story using the words gag, […]

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    1. I wouldn’t fancy that!

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  16. […] This week, Esther has selected the following words: TOMBOLA; SCORPIO; GAG; CLIMB; THRILLER & FUSSY – to create a story in 57 words 😃https://estherchilton.co.uk/2025/07/17/can-you-tell-a-story-in-296/ […]

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    1. You’ve had so much fun with that! 😂

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    1. Really glad you enjoyed it ❤️

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  17. This was a fun adventure, Esther. Thanks for letting all of us Story Chatters in on the fun.

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    1. It was great to have you ❤️

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      1. We’ll do it again, not each month, but it is a nice break for all of us from the regular thing. 🙂 xxx

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      2. It’s always good to try something different xxx

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      3. It was fun. I’ve opened up the comments, now, and Christine wrote another one and linked it. Too cute. I didn’t get all of your links attached to the post. You keep busy with all your participation, my friend. Whew. I was running at top speed trying to keep up, and I caved over for a bit for a rest. 🙂 xxx

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      4. I don’t blame you! It can be hard to keep up. You earned your rest xxx

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      5. 🙂 xxx

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  19. Charlotte was a fussy mountain climber and always first in line for the Tombola thriller night held monthly. You never knew if you were going to get a gag gift or something useful. She liked gifts related to mountain climbing, although that was rare. Her astrological sign was Scorpio, and she read it every morning with coffee.

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    1. A really great story from those words ❤️

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      1. Thank you!

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    aerobson

    Her aging Scorpio, thriller personality always won out. She wasn’t fussy where she sat. The climb to the cheap seats would be worth it.

    The screen lit up, a voice boomed. “Welcome to the historic awards for Tombola.”

    Was this a gag? She was certain her ticket read, Historic Awards of Alberto Tomba, her teenage crush…Sigh.

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    1. Very entertaining and left me with a smile.

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        aerobson

        Smiles are a good thing.

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  21. […] for Esther’s “Can You Tell A Story In…..?#296” – exactly 57 words using the six requiredprompts: ‘gag’, ‘climb’, ‘thriller’, […]

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    1. You made me smile. Thanks, Nancy.

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  22. A New Zodiac

    Twelve of us, chained, gagged and tagged, squirm beneath a flickering bulb. My label: Scorpio. He knows us.
    He spins a tombola machine, slow with fussy precision. A wannabe villain in a low-budget thriller; but real… too real. The sub-basement reeks of him: boiled eggs and sweat. I free my wrists and climb. A creak betrays me.

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    1. That’s a creepy story. I wanted to read more. Thanks, Andy.

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      1. Thanks. I do love to write horror / thriller. 😁

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    Sanny M

    The climb was steep but the loud rendition of Thriller pounding in her ear buds kept her going.
    She’d never won a tombola before and was now regretting this win.
    At the start she’d been gagged, thrown in with scorpions and was now being made to climb Mount Everest.
    What kind of a club had she joined?

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    1. A tombola with a dark twist. I love it!

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  24. “Gag me with a spoon! Listen to what it says about Scorpios: ‘determined to win at all cost. Won’t climb down from a challenge. Loves thrillers and games of chance, especially tombolas. Never fussy about what other people think.’ Uh-oh!”

    what?”

    “Aries is either a great partner or a deadly enemy.”

    “Guess that’s why we’re getting divorced.”

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    1. That last line is a belter! Thanks, Margaret.

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