Can You Tell A Story In…

We’re over halfway through the week and counting down until the weekend. Here’s your new story challenge.

Can you tell a story in 50 words using the following words in it somewhere:

  • VENDETTA
  • COOL
  • DOUGH
  • WHEEZE
  • SPIDER
  • REFLEXOLOGY

Last week’s challenge was to write a story in 40 words using the following words in it somewhere:

  • CURL
  • POTION
  • ROBIN
  • UNI-CYCLE
  • BOMBAST

Here are your fabulous stories:

S Wright:

Her long hair was soft and had one single curl over her brow.

She used some type of potion from the feather of a Robin.

She rode her uni-cycle to the store and cared less about others bombast of her!

Trent’s World:

“Drink THAT?”

“It’ll curl the hair on your chest.”

Katie laughed but downed the potion.

“Nothing yet… Oh my goodness!!!”

With all the comedic bombast of a hippo on a unicycle Katie did an interpretive dance.

“See?” Robin said, laughing.

Graeme Sandford:

The Robin and the Curlew watched as the gulls bombasted the holidaymakers, who refused to share their food.

“Did that large one say ‘Vegan-Option’ or ‘Magic-Potion’?”

“Neither! It told them to ‘make like a uni-cycle and scoot!”

Lisa A Paul:

A girl with golden curls named Robin rode her uni-cycle past Pete’s house every day. He tried to talk to her, using bombast in his language, but she ignored him. Pete wished he had a love potion!

Life Lessons:

Curling her palms around her usual potion, Robin tried to seal her ears to the bombastic recitations of the exploits of the geriatric uni-cyclist seated on a barstool to her right. Friday afternoon club was less fun in one’s seventies.

Sarah W:

The circusmaster’s bombast announced Robin as the world’s best. But backstage, a dizzy Robin sorely regretted downing so much secret potion. Nonetheless, he fluffed his curls, adjusted his leotard, and peddled his unicycle through the curtain and into the ring.

Nicola Daly:

‘It was that PC Bombast who arrested me. Caught me pinching the front wheel of a Robin Reliant for my uni-cycle. Ever so nice about it, he was. Even gave me some potion to perk up my curls.’

‘Oh Grandma!’

Ann Edall-Robson:

Robin peddled his uni-cycle around the Artistic Butter portion of the factory. Taking particular care scrutinizing his favourite station, flowers; especially the creativity of the petal curl. His caustic critiques and theatrical gestures had earned him the nickname Bombast.

Frank Hubney:

Moving a curl from her eyes, Robin pronounced with a bombastic cackle the ancient curse over the potion:

“When you drink this you shall be
a uni-cycle. He – he – he.”

Darren swallowed it all like a fool.

Nothing happened.

Christopher Farley:

After stealing Batman’s selection of natural oils and devising a lotion to make his hair curl, Robin sped away on his uni-cycle, leaving Batman to simply stand there while mouthing unheard bombast and waiving his fist at the wigged wonder.

Teleportingweena:

Riding a uni-cycle around town, wearing a hat with a robin perched on top, hollering, “Come one, come all … Buy my energy potion!– it will curl your hair and your toes!” Well, the townspeople just laughed at his bombastic claims.

Kate in Cornwall:

Celebrated French athlete, Monsieur Robin Bombast, took gold in the 2024 Olympics with his crowd-pleasing triple-curl uni-cycle feat. However, he was stripped of his medal when it emerged he had taken a performance enhancing potion to keep upright. The dope.

Tessa:

That day, I wore a robin blue dress, my curls tied up. After my daily practice, I put my unicycle away and pulled out my potions. I spent the rest of the day creating a potion for my bombastic ex-husband.

Kim Smyth:

The other day, I was riding my uni-cycle when I was bombasted by a flock of robins. I went into the house, grabbed my magic healing potion. Afterwards, I curled up with the latest novel by Esther Chilton, The Storm.

Christine Mallaband-Brown:

Curly sat on the uni-cycle. He wanted to try and ride it. But his bombastic teacher Robin wouldn’t help him. Curly remembered the potion his friend had given him. He dropped it in Robins water and was soon happily cycling.

Murray Clarke:

Robin was a very talented young individual who joined the circus and performed amazing tricks on his uni-cycle that would make your hair curl! After first downing a lethal potion of prescription drugs and alcohol, he’d descend rapidly to bombast.

My Mind Mappings:

Robin, a redhead with a curl was a clown. Another clown, who rode a unicycle, loved Robin. He found a witch who, with much bombast, brewed a love potion for him to give her. But she refused to drink it.

John W. Howell:

After the latest influencer bombast there is no surprise in seeing a girl named Robin on a unicycle chugging a potion that she says will likely curl her hair.

Pensititivy101:

Time to curl up on the sofa and let the sleeping potion get to work.
She dreamt of robins singing on unicycles which soon became overbearing bombastic chanting.

She woke up screaming and threw the witch’s brew in the bin!

A Scroll Threw Life:

With reckless bombast, Robin rides a motorized unicycle. Crashing into a bowl to join a birdie bathing bacchanal, which Robin hadn’t been invited to. A party where illicit potions were being served that would curl their little dirty birdy feet.

The Elephant’s Trunk:

Unicycle-riding clown Rolling Robin made a tragic error in judgement. He believed beguiling Wizard Bombast when he said drinking his potion would allow Robin to perform a perfect tightrope curl. Bombast was lying, of course, and now Robin feels miserable.

Treehugger:

I call my uni-cycle Bombast. My favourite trick is to drink a home -made potion to improve my balance, then cycle around with my pet robin on my head, hoping he wouldn’t get his claws stuck in my curly hair.

L Wie:

The robin in the tree watched the old Mr. Bombast whom nobody liked as he massaged a potion onto his huge bald head. A moment later a young red head with curls jumped onto his uni-cycle and took off grinning.

Therapy Bits:

Robin rode her uni-cycle through the misty forest, clutching a curl of ancient parchment. With bombast, she chanted a spell. The potion shimmered. Trees bent in awe. The air split—magic returned, and the forgotten world woke again.

The Abject Muse:

Robin blasted down the street on her unicycle, curls bouncing in the breeze. She swerved out of her lane, and a driver yelled at her with bombast. She didn’t care. The potion was more important.

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65 responses to “Can You Tell A Story In…”

  1. nikidaly70 Avatar
    nikidaly70

    No matter how much dough he kneaded, his stomach was rather rotund, his arms were like twigs, and he still had a wheeze. At this rate he’d never get the part of spiderman in the new, cool movie ‘Vendetta of a Villainous Viper’. Perhaps he should try reflexology after all?

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    1. That made me burst out laughing! Thanks, Nicola.

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      1. nikidaly70 Avatar
        nikidaly70

        You’re welcome – they were fun words today! 🙂

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    1. That made me smile. Love the spider pic too!

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  2. “Keep cool, Shirl.”

    He smiled as she entered.

    He hadn’t recognized her! 

    Skilled in reflexology, Shirley knew she could induce a stroke; with his death her vendetta would end.

    She kneaded the foot like dough.

    A wheeze; great!

    “You don’t have a spider’s chance in Hell, Shirley.  Say goodnight.”

    Bang!

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    1. Very dark, Trent! And entertaining 😊

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      1. Thanks, Esther. When there is a vendetta involved, well… 😉

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    1. A really great story, Carol anne.

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    Aidin Lee

    She kneaded the dough, fingers pressing like a study in reflexology. Bruises bloomed beneath flour-dusted skin.

    A spider watched from the cool windowpane. A man’s wheeze broke the hush.

    She wiped sweat from her lip, careful not to taste the poison, then smiled at the spider, “All vendettas end in silence.”

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    1. Hi Aidin, thanks for this gripping story. You’ve done brilliantly with those words.

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  5. “Have you tried reflexology?” Steve asked Sharon trying to be cool.

    “No.”

    “Have you seen ‘The Vendetta Spider From Mars’?”

    “No.”

    “Can you spell ‘wheeze’?”

    “No.”

    “How about ‘dough’?”

    “No.”

    At this point Steve realized they had nothing in common. He turned to Sylvia.

    Before he asked, she said, “No.”

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    1. That’s a great story – made me laugh. Thanks, Frank.

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  6. Vendetta he thought as he lay on the Reflexology table, his feet delicately manipulated. It cost loads of dough but helped him relax. Maybe it would be cool to put a poisonous spider on her face at night? He’d fake a wheeze, go into the bathroom. Later finding her collapsed?

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    1. Deliciously dark, Christine!

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  7. Kate in Cornwall Avatar
    Kate in Cornwall

    With her pudgy face (dough balls), spider veins (booze), and chronic wheeze (fags), Belinda Bliss (stupid name, not cool) is giving reflexology a bad name. It’s not a vendetta; it’s just the rest of us reflexologists want her struck off. 

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    1. That made me laugh. Poor Brenda 😆

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  8. Kate in Cornwall Avatar
    Kate in Cornwall

    Thank you so much but I just realised that I misread the challenge and only wrote 40 words instead of 50!! School girl error – I thought it was flipping difficult!

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    1. Well, you did even better then!

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      1. Kate in Cornwall Avatar
        Kate in Cornwall

        Thank you so much, Esther. I signed up for your Flash Fiction Course this morning (ironic, huh?) – feel free to expel me from school before lessons have even begun! I am such a twit at times. 🙄

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      2. 😂😂😂 I hope you enjoy it, Kate 😊

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  9. I thought I was cool and I took Spider’s dough without thinking about the consequences. I was out back having a smoke. I took a wheeze on my cigarette before his vendetta came upon me. I didn’t know having my legs tucked around my ears was a form of reflexology.

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    1. I didn’t either 😂 Amusing story, Chris.

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      1. I love the way you make it more challenging, Ess. I’d never heard “wheeze” for a cigarette until I saw Withnail and I 35 years ago. “Gis a wheeze on that fag”.
        😂

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  10. squirreljan Avatar
    squirreljan

    It was a cool wheeze and not a vendetta, like the other girls said. In payment for administering the antidote to the poisonous spider bite she planned to inflict, he would give her freedom, enough dough to set up her own reflexology business, and leave his massage emporium for good.

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    1. Very well-crafted, Janice.

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  11. Charles had a vendetta against Laura although he kept his cool around her.

    He walked into the kitchen where she was kneading dough.

    A wheeze was on her chest from chasing a spider in the damp basement.

    She took a reflexology course to help others who had the same symptoms.

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    1. Great story! You’ve done well with those words.

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      1. Thank you, Esther!! 🙂

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  12. I am trying so I hope my writing is getting there! 🙂

    Thanks for these prompts Esther. I can hardly wait to get the Flash Fiction course.

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    1. I think you’ll really enjoy it.

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  13. I heard a faint wheeze and felt a rush of cold air. It appears the air conditioner has begun to work again. The dough I paid for service is worth every penny. No vendetta or spider down the nose will be needed with this technician. My neck ache is gone and I think the reflexology sessions and competent service people are paying off.

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    1. That’s a fun story, John. I like your use of the words.

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      1. I’m glad you did. Reminded me of the time I used to mow a mob boss’s lawn. I always tried to do a really good job.

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    1. Loved your story. So good 😊

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  14. The night was cool as Sandy drove to her reflexology appointment. Checking her purse for the dough, she began to wheeze when she saw it was missing. Oh! The last straw!
    Driving back, she worked out her vendetta on that little turd,
    They found a spider at her crash site.

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    1. A great story there, Kim 😍

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      1. Thank you!

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    1. Great story. Thank you 😊

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    2. Kate in Cornwall Avatar
      Kate in Cornwall

      Love this! I used to be a reflexologist and “a vendetta simmering beneath lavender oil and soft music” made me laugh!

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      1. Thanks. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

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  15. […] Can You Tell A Story In… […]

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    1. Thank you for your story.

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    • VENDETTA
    • COOL
    • DOUGH
    • WHEEZE
    • SPIDER
    • REFLEXOLOGY

    The weather was cool
    A lot of flu about
    Clients coughing and wheezing
    She had so many this week
    didn’t know how she would manage
    At times like this being a reflexologist
    was no fun but she needed the dough
    and running a car like a spider was not cheap

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    1. Really enjoyed that. Thank you 😊

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  16. We argued to the point it made me wheeze .A vendetta was looming .

    The dead spider on the kitchen floor popped into the dough of my homemade doughnuts .I made him a special one. He wouldn’t be able to resist.

    Cool, I thought as I cycled to my reflexology class.

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    1. Funny. Wouldn’t like a dead spider in my doughnuts! Or one that’s alive either 😂

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      1. thankyou Esther

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  17. It wasn’t cool to wheeze while punching down bread dough. Her employees hated the sound and launched a vendetta against the aging Italian Bakery owner to make a reflexology appointment or sell to them. That was when her friend Spider started making unscheduled monthly visits to talk with the staff. 

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    1. That’s hilarious! You’re so good at these, Ann.

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    1. Brilliant poem! Loved it 🥰

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    1. Thank you. For some reason I couldn’t comment directly. But great response!

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    1. Thanks for your super story, Nancy.

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      1. Always my pleasure, Esther. Thank you for such consistently great prompts!

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    1. Thank you for your entertaining story.

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