Writing Prompts

Last week, your writing prompt was LIGHT. So I thought it fitting to go for the opposite this week: DARK. The word has so many meanings – a dark sky or night, for instance. Or what about darkness in someone’s soul? It also symbolises death, despair and deceit. We can also think about it in terms of magic and mystery. But it can have positive connotations, allowing one to access the deepest parts of their subconscious mind to inspire change or it can be a catalyst to move forward in terms of enlightenment. The word dark holds different meaning to people from different cultures.

What does DARK mean to you?

I always enjoy seeing what you come up with if the prompt gives you inspiration, but there’s no obligation to share your writing. Here is the work you shared on the last prompt LIGHT.

Kim Smyth:

The light of the Lord is in my soul,

My cup runneth over to fill my bowl

I worry no more

I know what’s in store

What will be will be, that’s how I now roll!

John W. Howell:

“Hey Mac. You gotta a light?”

“For that cigarette?”

“No to show me the way. Yes, for the cigarette.”

“Not helping with your suicide. Let me pass.”

“We are all dying anyway.”

“No need to hurry it up.”

“You a doctor?”

“No.”

“Do gooder then?”

“Nope. Just someone who used to smoke.”

“Gave it up, huh?”

“No. Smoked until my last breath.”

“You’re kidding.”

“Want to see me fade.”

Pensitivity101:

The single flame lights the way,
Our loved ones are never far,
Memories remain in our hearts,
Visible as the brightest star.
Special days, or just because,
A candle is lit for each,
Distance is irrelevant,
Love is always within reach.

Therapy Bits:

Chasing Sunlight

Through emerald fields where shadows play,

I chase the sun with eager strides,

Beyond the hills, where gleams of day

Eclipse the night, as darkness hides.

The golden beams, they dance and sway,

In whispers soft, they call my name,

To follow paths where dreams delay,

And hearts ignite with fervent flame.

Across the sky, where colors blend,

From dawn to dusk, they paint the air,

As daylight’s kiss begins to mend

The fractured hopes that linger there.

In endless chase, I find my peace,

For every ray holds tales untold,

With each new dawn, a sweet release,

In sunlight’s grasp, my heart unfolds.

Through valleys deep and mountains high,

I seek the light that guides my way,

With heaven’s glow, my soul will fly,

In pursuit of the sun’s embrace each day.

And as the twilight starts to fade,

I’ll hold the warmth within my chest,

For chasing sunlight, unafraid,

Is where my spirit finds its rest.

Utahan15:

light is life

lift is bright

such a sight

its both day and night!

My Mind Mappings:

I used to be an optimist always seeing the sunny side.

No matter how dark things appeared to be, I could manage to see the light at the end of the tunnel.

But these days, the United States is in a very dark place and I don’t feel confident that there is a light at the end of the tunnel.

In fact, it feels like the tunnel has been destroyed and whatever light there might have been on the other side, is now out of reach or has been extinguished.

Leaving me bewildered and feeling hopeless.

I’m so sorry.

Musings By Doddzilla:

Light’s Out

The last light has faded

I have as well

What will happen tomorrow

No one can tell

Each new beginning once had a past

We always keep moving, nothing can last

Take your rest

Try your best

I pray tonight

You are blessed.

Michnavs:

Stick in Time

The late afternoon sun spills through the windshield, casting a warm glow over the dashboard as the car moves forward. Your hands on the steering wheel, but your gaze drifts to me in the passenger seat. Your laughter slices through the tension like a knife, and for a moment, I forget the horns blaring outside.

“Can you believe this?” I whisper, frustrated. But your smile is a balm, soothing the chaos of the world outside.

“What’s the rush?” you reply, leaning back, eyes sparkling in the golden light. “We’ve got time.”

You glance at the rearview mirror. Cars piled behind us, a mess of impatient riders and drivers. But I can’t care less. I should be annoyed, but how can I be when your presence makes the mundane feel extraordinary?

“Honestly, I could sit here forever,” I think. Each moment in this cocoon of steel feels like an eternity wrapped in silk. The world can wait; this fleeting moment is ours.

The car jolts slightly, the engine sputtering back to life as we move another few feet. I can feel the tension building again, the impatience creeping back in. But then you turn to me, your eyes catching the late afternoon light, and it’s as if time stands still.

“Let’s play a game,” you say, breaking the silence. “What’s your dream vacation?”

I smile, the traffic forgotten. “Anywhere with you,” I say, and it’s true. I don’t need a destination; I just need this moment. The chaos outside pales against the serenity of your presence.

As we sit, the sun begins its descent, painting the sky in hues of orange and pink. The world feels irrelevant. The cars may be stuck, but I’m free, lost in our bubble. Here, time stretches, and chaos transforms into a sweet stillness. I could stay like this forever, enveloped in our own little universe, where the only thing that matters is us.

Padre’s Ramblings:

“Is this gloom – what they call despair?

Where is the brightness – of when I’d no cares?

The light seems absent – a thing just beyond reach

Whom shall I turn to; who shall I beseech?”

There is one: the Light of the World manifested

He’s not all that distant, and He’s interested.

Opposing the things that darken your existence –

From shadow and strife – He offers assistance

“Do not surrender to the dark – and its privation

But, come into the Light” is His invitation

Christine Mallaband-brown:

Light, a rainbow effect, but black? Darkness, hidden, lonely. Why do I want to sit hidden in the dark as the days sparkle around me? Is this my fate? I need to escape into light, but by the time my sad thoughts allow me it will probably be raining. We have been singing “this little light of mine” at choir recently. I need a glimmer of hope. 

Lisa A Paul:

You loved the sunlight. Even when you were pale and skinny, you would take off your shirt and sit outside, the sunlight warming your skin. Especially after the endless gray, dark days of winter when we were cooped up inside. Then Spring started to tease us with a warm day here or there and blue skies with bright sunlight. You took advantage of those bright days of light. You said you “lived” for days like those

Sickness had a way of peeling back all the layers of what we believed was important. One by one, a layer would fall away. Working, holding grudges, complaining about stupid things, what the neighbors would think, falling and falling away. Revealing what was really important: love, hope, faith, kindness, togetherness, unity, strength and beauty.

So, on a beautiful day filled with light and warmth, we would try to revel in its perfection. We would sit outside until our skin was burning with the heat, then retreat into a shady spot. We would watch the red tailed hawks and gray herons fly overhead, and the sparrows, robins and cardinals flit around the yard. The lake would move with the breeze blowing over it, and sparkle with the reflected sunlight. Our tomato plants would fill the yard with their earthy scent, and the dog would be busy chasing squirrels into trees. And we would talk and talk. We always had things to talk about, you and I.

This spring I will sit outside and remember you. I will see you in my mind, the light spilling over your chest and hear you laugh at something funny I said. I will feel the peace we once shared in the yard of our home and I will miss you, but I will love you even more.

Roberta Writes:

Painter’s Challenge

Anguish reflected

But not absorbed by water

Which also soaks up

Essence of trees and buildings

For serene contemplation

***

Natures pain entrapped

Within deep, inky waters

No amount of tears

Ruffling its exterior

Can change on-going flow

***

Many lives ended

Sinking into death’s embrace

Silent and secret

Water does not pass judgement

Gleaming countenance unchanged

***

Interplay of light

Old Man River stays focused

Moody sky tantrums

Painter tries to replicate

Scene perfected by nature

***

Black, white and silver

Shot through with green and auburn

Captures canal’s soul

Embalming in acrylic

Turbulent natural conflict

***

Anguish reflected

Within deep, inky waters

Silent and secret

Painter tries to replicate

Turbulent natural conflict

***

33 responses to “Writing Prompts”

  1. dark is mental nuts in the park

    yell scream

    no peace

    least most

    look and feel empty too

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    1. Thank you for your words on the prompt 😊

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      1. It’s stunning.

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    1. Thank you for your thoughts on the prompt. I completely agree!

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      1. You’re welcome Esther.

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    1. Thank you so much for this. It fits the prompt so well.

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  2. Jerry’s first job was as a door to door salesman. The product he was to sell was dark. That was not the name that was the actual product. After several months he had not sold a single order of dark. One night he went to a company meeting and sat next to an old guy. “How’s it going?” said the old guy. Jerry explained that he hadn’t sold a single order. The old guy pulled at his chin and looked Jerry up and down. “Lemme hear your pitch.”

    Jerry cleared his throat and began. The old guy stopped him immediately. “No wonder you can’t sell any dark. You have to offer a reason to buy.”

    “Like what?”

    “Show em what happens when you open a jar of dark.”

    “But then I waste a jar.”

    “So what? When they see the advantage of dark you’ll sell five more.”

    So Jerry went out the next day and did as the old guy suggested. His first stop was a widow’s place. She let him in and after a few words he opened a jar of dark. When she stopped screaming and let go of Jerry she ordered five jars. When the light returned Jerry asked her, “How come five jars?

    “As you know I’m a widow. When a gentleman calls this product will give me a great opportunity to scream my head off and grab the guy. He will want to protect me so he will hug me and them I’ll have him where I want him.”

    Jerry wrote up the order and left. About three weeks later he saw the widow on the street. She rushed up to him and breathlessly ordered five more jars. “I guess the dark works like you said.”

    “No. All of the men ran off.”

    “Why order more then?”

    “One of these days one will stick around. Besides it is so much fun hearing grown men scream their heads off. and try to explain how they wet themselves.”

    Jerry went on to become the company president.

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    1. You’re so god at building up to the end of a story. Really entertaining, John.

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      1. Thank you so much, Esther. I appreciate the compliment.

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  3. Hi Esther, Do I post my response to your prompt here? I wasn’t sure. Thanks 🙂

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    1. Yes please do 😊

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    1. Really enjoyed your light and dark ❤️

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  4. Darkness is needed for astronomy. We used to drive out at night to try and see meteor showers or comets, or stand in the garden under the shadow of the hedge and try and see Jupiter and it’s moons (we used a telescope) and even Saturn and it’s rings. We saw both planets.
    Once we drove under clouded skies to chase a massive meteor shower of up to 100 meteors an hour. But we never got out from under the layer of thin low cloud even though we drove at least 40 miles.
    On another occasion we went out and drove into a wood so we could see a beautiful greenish comet. That was amazing. Finally we recently saw the aurora borealis. An amazing thing to see in the UK.

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    1. That really must have been wonderful. Thank you for sharing this, Christine ❤️

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  5. here is mine for this week Esther:

    Dark Was My Light

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    1. So beautiful as always, Mich ❤️

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    1. Thank you so much for joining in.

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    1. Thank you so much for your heartfelt true story. It’s beautifully told 💕

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      1. Thank you very much, Esther ❤️

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    1. Thanks you so much for your wonderful poem 🥰

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    What do you get when you you put two claustrophobics in a pitch black confined space with no obvious sign of a way out? Sheer panic!

    My brother and I both have the same affliction, so the two us together are not the best combination.

    We were at Jersey Zoo and decided to visit the bat house. Never mind bats, there wasn’t enough room in there to swing a cat. No sooner had we entered and the door closed behind us, when my brother started screaming ‘Where’s the way out, where’s the way out?’!

    Fortunately there was another couple in there, who calmly pointed to the exit sign at the other end.

    We were only in there for a matter of seconds, we never got to see any bats; we were both out of that door like, well, bats out of hell!

    I don’t think we’ll be going back in there again….

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    1. Oh no! Not a nice experience. I’ve been in a bat house and it’s a very claustrophobic. Thank you for sharing that, Val.

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