Can You Tell A Story In…

I hope your week is a good one so far. Not long until the weekend. Before then, here is a new story challenge for you:

Can you tell a story in 27 words? You must use the following words somewhere in the story:

  • TEETH
  • PASSWORD
  • HONK

The previous prompt was to tell a story in 38 words using the following words in it somewhere:

  • HULLABALLOO
  • QUEUE
  • SLUG
  • BEAM
  • WAFFLE

Here are your brilliant stories:

Life Lessons:

The hullabaloo
in the breakfast queue 
just had to do
with those picky few
who walked the beam
on the gymnastic team
who declared the waffle
was simply awful!
Who, at the most,
could slug down the toast!

Frank Hubney:

Brian listened to the news.

The hullabaloo came from a queue when a slug tried to beam up a waffle.

Brian thought. Not that he thought a lot.

He was used to the news. He turned it off.

John W. Howell:

Standing in an endless queue some guy way up front flashed a beam of light. He created a hullabaloo with those of us who wanted to sleep off the bourbon waffles. The infernal slug.

Murray Clarke:

Down at the local supermarket, there was one hell of a hullabaloo in the queue outside for the waffle stall. A slovenly slug, broad in the beam, was slithering at a ridiculously slow pace and holding everyone up!

Tessa:

A long queue was waiting to see the entertaining hullabaloo at the liquor store around the corner. A man took a slug of James Beam bourbon and then took a waffle covered in whipped cream to the face.

Fedesponderings:

“What’s all the hullabaloo?” I ask as the sluggish queue stops moving entirely.

The cause? A brawl over who’d get to the last order of waffles. The fight’s over quickly. The victor beaming as the loser sulks off.

Treehugger:

I was standing in the theatre queue waiting to see ‘Hullabaloo on Broadway’. On sitting down the beam from the usher’s flashlight lit up a slug crawling up my trouser leg. She pointed excitedly and started to waffle.

Christine Mallaband-Brown:

There’s a hullaballoo about the queue for slug waffles. The crows beam with their big beaks as they imagine worm sandwiches for tea.
Meanwhile the Robins are waiting for their grubs! Only seagulls ate the vegetarian option… Chips!

Pensivity101:

There was quite a hullabaloo in the cafe queue after someone found a slug in the bottom of their coffee cup.

The manageress was called and with a beaming smile, offered compensation of a fresh waffle with cream.

Christopher Farley:

Did you see that great, big slug

with that full-tooth beam on his ugly mug

and spouting loads of waffle?

2 deep and 10 yards long

was the queue for the loo

and the slug causing the hullabaloo

Ann Edall-Robson:

The detective’s breakfast of a waffle and bacon had been interrupted to attend this hullabaloo surrounding a shooting at a concert queue. Then he saw the slug from the gun lodged in the beam. “UP THERE!” He bellowed.

Wilf Leahy:

Waffle waffle, the young man kept on and on about the state of the beam. He was causing such a hullabaloo the old lady standing behind him in the queue slugged him one with her hand bag.

The Elephant’s Trunk:

I was standing in a queue at the House of Waffles
when a slug slithered by.
All at once he started dancing the hullabaloo,
flashed his high beams at me
and took off like a bat outta hell.

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46 responses to “Can You Tell A Story In…”

  1. She got up, popped her teeth in her mouth and turned on the computer. Darn! She forget her password, again. A car outside honked. She remembered, honkifyouthinkImcute.

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    1. That’s so funny, Darlene 💗

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  2. i get teeth in me

    and tensed everytime they honk!

    password the same

    buzz kill

    the thrill gone

    be off

    and know i saw what you did !

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    1. Thank you, Utahan!

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  3. – [ ] Staring at the traffic lights, Pat grinded her teeth as she tried to remember her password! The cars honking was not helping her! It was getting late!

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    1. You’ve had fun with that. Thank you so much 💗

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  4. I forgot my password at the ATM. The car behind me honked its horn, yelling at me to hurry up. They needed money for their sore teeth.

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    1. Very well done with that, Tessa.

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  5. It is vital that action be taken to stop the missiles. The password written on a piece of paper held tightly in my teeth disappears in the honk of my sneeze.

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    1. So good. Thank you, John 😊

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      1. Thanks, Esther

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  6. Gritting my teeth I carefully tried the password again.  Third strike, I was out, and the car began to honk.  Why can’t we go back to keys?

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    1. I love that! I remember the days of proper car keys!

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      1. I do like the key-fob, but am not ready for password protected cars! Thanks.

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  7. The site rejected “honk” as a password, being too short, and “teeth”, because it didn’t have goofy characters in it.

    It was a joke site after all.

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    1. That’s hilarious. Thanks, Frank.

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  8. Teeth is my new computer password. The alarm is set to “honk” if anyone breaches it! Oops! Now I’ve told it you. Better change it to dentures!

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    1. That’s so funny 😂

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  9. While sitting in my car, I gritted my teeth as I feverishly tried to remember the password to unlock my phone. Before long, cars began to honk!

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  10. A password for this, a password for that, soon we’ll need a password to honk the car horn. It’s like pulling teeth trying to remember them all.

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    1. Very good, Chris. Thanks for that 🥰 Have a good weekend.

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      1. Thanks Esther,
        You too.🤗

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    1. I really enjoyed it. Thank you.

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  12. The handsome dentist was so unindated with young female clients, he told his receptionist to set up a system using the password ‘honk’ for his regular clients.

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    1. Very witty. Thanks, Sheila.

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    squirreljan

    Honk! Incorrect password. I gritted my teeth. One more attempt before I was locked out.
    I typed Yetanother****ing1!666. Result. Now why the devil hadn’t I remembered that.

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    1. Very funny. Thanks, Janice. Hope you’ve had a good weekend.

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    Honk Honk!  My grandson had cycled round to see me.

    Can I come in?

    What’s the password?

    Don’t know nanny, but the tooth fairy came last night!

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    1. Love that, Val 💗

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        Thanks Esther

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    1. It’s so good 😊

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      1. Thanks so much, Esther! ☺️

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  17. HONK! They all knew the password. Time to sink their teeth into the migration journey ahead of them. The Canada Geese lifted off, forming their recognizable V.

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    1. This brought a vivid picture to mind 😊

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      1. Watching them fly over and hearing their sound is a scene i love to see. I warms my heart.

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    1. Thank you so much for posting these 😊

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