Can You Tell A Story In…

As it’s Christmas (almost), you have two weeks in which to dazzle us with your story. Here is your Christmas challenge:

Can you tell a story in 25 words? You must use the following words somewhere in the story:

  • SCROOGE
  • GNOME
  • CHIMNEY
  • GLOWING

Last week’s prompt was to tell a story in 40 words using the following words in it somewhere:

  • BORED
  • PONY
  • COCONUT
  • RESCUE
  • PIANO

Here are your fantastic stories:

poetessadeilibri:

A bored pony came to the rescue of a coconut piano floating on the sea. Christmas night was near, and the lighthouse illuminated the pony sat in front of the piano, starting the concert that would last until midnight’s eve.

Murray Clarke:

Bored, Burlington Bertie from Bow was reposed on a coconut mat he’d rescued from a skip. He sat up. “Cor blimey, Guv!” he said. “Take a butcher’s at that old piano! Got to be worth a pony of anyone’s money.”

John W. Howell:

The piano player owned a pony that he received from the local rescue group. The pony was often bored, but could be satisfied with a coconut massage. The piano player developed a Pina Colada drinking problem.

Tessa:

I was bored, super silly, and I needed a way to rescue myself from boredom. I could play the grand piano at my grandmother’s, I could throw coconuts with my brother, or ride the world’s smallest pony at the circus.

Christine Mallaband-Brown:

Bored stiff, I decided to ride my pony. Little did I know that he would take fright and gallop off into the night before gate crashing a piano concert, they thought his hooves were the sound of coconuts! Rescue me!

Linking People 2003:

Bored in an old-fashioned village, Sony noticed a lonely pony munching on coconut under cow shed! Suddenly, someone requested for music! Curious Sony quickly rushed into nearby barn, finding a piano, played a harmonious melody, to rescue everyone from boredom!

Sexagenarian Scribbler:

Pony: ‘I’m so bored, and sick of being sat on! Life’s no merry-go-round for me. And that blaring organ music; give me a piano any day.

At least I’m not a coconut, having balls thrown at me all day long….’

Ann Edall-Robson:

The Hawaiian themed recital was not going well. Ms. Pony decided it was time to kick it up a notch. Nodding to the piano player, she danced onto the stage wearing a hula skirt and a coconut shell bikini top.

Adarsh G:

In the serenity of coconut trees apart from my bored lifestyle I got a chance to explore some new experiences of riding a pony, over the overcast conditions of the seashore side where light dwelling into twilight with people around enjoying there ever into karaoke groups with melodic piano tunes. Such a wonderful and pleasant day out there.

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39 responses to “Can You Tell A Story In…”

  1. Love the festive prompt Esther!

    Here is my contribution:

    Glowing with smug satisfaction, Scrooge settled back in his chair. Stuffing that pesky gnome up the chimney had stopped the chilly draught instantly. A masterstroke!

    And Andrew’s:

    “Bah, Humbug!”, Scrooge cackled maniacally. He’d received a gnome for Christmas, but the rocket’s fuse was glowing and ready to shoot it up the chimney.

    Merry Christmas Esther and all readers of the blog 🎄🎅

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    1. Thank you, Sarah and Andrew, for these two gems which made me smile. Very entertaining. Wishing you a very happy Christmas.

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  2. I am a scrooge. I find gnomes ugly. I never believed in Santa Clause going up the chimney and doubt Rudolf has a glowing nose.

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    1. You’ve done brilliantly with those!

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      1. Thank you!

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  3. Thanks Esther for the last. Here’s the next

    Scrooge finished his Christmas schnapps and noticed his Apple Watch glowing announcing a gnome at the front door. “Use the chimney, you oaf.”

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    1. That made me laugh. Thanks for that, John.

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      1. Always happy to make you laugh.

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    1. Thank you for joining in, Carol anne.

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  5. Glowing brightly the gnome floated above the chimney, awaiting revenge ! Soon he would dive down and splatter Scrooge with soot! He giggled hysterically in anticipation.

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    1. That is brilliant! Hilarious 😂

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    1. Many thanks for joining in 🥰

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  6. Thanks for this wonderful share Esther ❤️

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  7. Thanks for the fun prompt, Esther. I love the responses so far. Hilarious. Here’s my attempt:

    Scrooge wearied of glowing ghosts. But when a gnome dropped from the chimney with a bit of Christmas cheer, into the snowy garden it went.

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    1. That’s really funny. Love that! Thank you for joining in 😊

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  10. The gnome saw glowing when he looked down the chimney. He didn’t know it was Scrooge asleep on the floor, his nose red from whisky.

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    1. Excellent! Thanks, Chris. Have a good weekend.

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      1. Thanks Esther. You too.

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  11. The intermittent gold bricks glowing from the cottage’s chimney was the tip Detective Gnome had received. The gangster called Scrooge was about to be apprehended. 

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    1. Love that crime story!

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    1. Thank you so much for sharing your excellent story 😊

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  14. Hi, merry Christmas. Your posts aren’t always showing up in my feed? Xxxx

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    1. I’m not sure why. WordPress likes to do odd things! Merry Christmas. Take care xxxx

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