Can You Tell A Story In…

It’s Thursday and time for a new story. Here’s the latest story challenge:

Can you tell a story in 42 words? You must use the following words somewhere in the story:

  • TWITCH
  • DENTIST
  • SUITCASE
  • EGG
  • SQUARE
  • CHIN

Last week’s prompt was to tell a story in 34 words using the following words in it somewhere:

  • MIRROR
  • FUDGE
  • REFUND
  • HOVER
  • CAGE

Here are your funny stories:

Nicola Daly:

The angry fairy flew from the mirror as she chased fraudulent Freddy Fudge. She hovered above an iron cage shaking her tiny fist. “I’ll lock you in here if you don’t refund my money!”

The Bag Lady:

Needing a refund, Sara hovered over her selected bag of fudge—peppermint sticks from the Christmas cage not her choice, but saw her reflection in the counter’s mirror. “I’ll take these instead.”

Kim Smyth:

Before Maria returned the awful fudge to the store for a refund, she observed her parakeets in their cage. Sam was admiring himself in the mirror as Daisy hovered near. Her turn was next!

Tessa:

“I need more fudge,” Daisy shouted to the maid hovering around her.

“You returned it yesterday for a refund, Ma’am. Don’t you remember?”

Daisy threw the cage across the room and broke the mirror.

Murray Clarke:

Her finger began to hover over the refund button. Overcharged for fudge again – purchased from the “bargain” cage! I caught sight of my reflection in the supermarket mirror, a big smile on my face.

Christine Mallaband-Brown:

He looked in the mirror.. Oh no! Fudge on the jacket! Could he ask for a refund? He hovered by the cash register cage in trepidation. Could he catch the cashier’s eye, good luck!

Squirreljan:

“Don’t fudge it, you wimp. Demand a refund.” Wendy glared at herself in the mirror before looking at the broken cage with Petula hovering above it. “Don’t fudge it, you wimp,” the parrot echoed.

Treehugger:

Checking Polly Parrot was still in her cage, I glanced in the mirror, then marched to the local shop, hovered outside, then entered and demanded a refund for selling me out of date fudge.

Sexagenarian Scribbler:

I hover over Freddy’s cage as, at his mirror, he sings ‘A Finger of Fudge is just enough.’ for the one hundredth time.

Returning him and asking for a refund suddenly sounds rather tempting.

Ann Edall-Robson:

No longer could she hover in front of the looking glass primping and preening. The reflection saw her locked in a watery cage without salted fudge. Time to return the mirror for a refund. 

Sharron P:

“This fudge tastes awful!” the fairy spluttered, hovering over the golden cage, showering the bird inside with crumbs. It head-butted its mirror in disgust.

“Told you!” the princess said, pouting. “Get me a refund!

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16 responses to “Can You Tell A Story In…”

  1. The suitcase banged against my shin as I ran across the square. I hate the dentist and this time he had a pretty new assistant but that one terrified twitch left me with egg on my face and drool on my chin.

    And 42 it is. 🙂

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    1. Excellent! Thanks, Chris 😄

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  2. Maggie twitched uncomfortably in the dentist’s chair. She wanted to punch him square on the chin for hurting her so much. She eyed the carton of eggs wickedly. She picked up the eggs and stashed the carton in her suitcase for later.

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    1. Very funny. Thanks, Tessa 😄

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      1. I thought it was pretty funny myself LOL!

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  3. Sit still! Don’t twitch! Said the dentist as he held the man’s square chin in his hand. The man had been egged on by his mates to come, but really he wanted to pack a suitcase and run away to the circus!

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    1. That’s so good! Thank you 😍

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    The man with a square chin took an egg from his suitcase and bit into it. Yellow dribbled down his chin and dripped onto his pink fluffy tie.
    ‘You’re very twitchy,’ he grumbled. ‘You can trust me, you know. I’m a dentist.’

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    1. Very good, Nicola. Thank you 😄

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  5. My ugly, square suitcase is packed. As soon as the dentist finishes with me, I’m off! I twitch as he approaches me, almost bumping his chin. “Relax” he says. I only hope he doesn’t see the boiled egg in my teeth!

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    1. Ha, ha! Very good 😄

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      1. Thanks Esther!!

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  7. The dentist observed a yellow cloud wafting upward from a suitcase on the baggage trolley. An odour resembling sulphur, or a rotting egg. The woman beside him started to twitch, her square chin quivering, eyes pleading. The train’s whistle muffled her screams.

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    1. That’s absolutely brilliant. Well done for that.

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