Can You Tell A Story In…

Hello there. I hope your week is going well. Here’s a new story challenge for you:

Can you tell a story in 33 words? You must use the following words somewhere in the story:

  • TOUPEE
  • HICCUP
  • MASTERMIND
  • CRUMBLE
  • SQUIRREL

Last week’s prompt was to tell a story in 41 words using the following words in it somewhere:

  • MAZE
  • QUIT
  • CABBAGE
  • REFEREE
  • POETRY
  • HOSPITAL

Here are your entertaining stories:

Christine Mallaband-Brown:

As Mark strolled round the maze he called over the referee. I have quit cabbage soup he said. It helps with weight loss, but I ended up in hospital. Believe it or not the thing that calmed it down was poetry!

Tessa Dean:

I was ready to quit the maze. The cabbage field to my left had a poetry reading going on, and on the other side was a football game with a referee. The sudden chest pains sent me scrambling to the hospital.

Treehugger:

He was kicking the cabbage around like a football. The referee remarked it was like poetry in motion, but when he wanted to kick it around the maze, his friend told him to quit or he would end up in hospital.

Nicola Daly:

‘This hospital is a maze. I always get lost.’

‘And we wouldn’t have to come so often if you didn’t keep eating all that cabbage.’

”Well, how else can I get them to quit asking me to referee the poetry recitals?’

Squirreljan:

I was poetry in motion, racing through the maze, carrying a giant cabbage. The white clad referee shouting, “Don’t quit. You can do it!” Breathless, sweating, legs crumbling, I crossed the finishing line and came to in my hospital bed, alive.

Carol Miers:

The referee thought it was the cabbage when Jim collapsed then died in hospital but there was another condition – Cancer, so I quit smoking.

I am a-maze-d.

We can be. Be and be better. For they existed, so the poetry goes.

Sharon’s Writers Tidbits:

Fred’s mind was a maze of thoughts as he ate the yuck cabbage in hospital. Even if he lost the poetry competition he wouldn’t quit writing.

‘Foul!’ Fred shouted at the TV. Stupid referee should pay more attention. ‘Football!’ He groaned!

Sharron P:

The referee blew his whistle. It was the cabbage football maze-running championships 2024 and they were underway! Everyone knew Samuel Quit would win for his side. He’s pure poetry in motion, but… splat! He’s fallen over. To the hospital it is.

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28 responses to “Can You Tell A Story In…”

  1. I was watching Mastermind and was convinced a contestant had a fluffy orange toupee? Just then the question master hiccupped. The audience crumbled into laughter and a squirrel jumped off the contestants head!

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    1. Now, I’d like to see that! 😂😂

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  2. Brian sat eating his blackberry crumble trying to mastermind a plan to get rid of the pesky squirrel. He hiccuped and adjusted his toupee. He prepped then the trap with peanuts and waited.

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    1. Hilarious! 🤣

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  3. https://tessadeanauthor.com/2024/06/06/can-you-tell-a-story-in-6/

    I adjusted my toupee. A hiccup caused me to lose sight of the squirrel. What kind of mastermind loses sight of their quarry during a hiccup? I felt the plan crumble before me.

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    1. That’s very funny. Thank you, Tessa 😊

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      1. Thank you!

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    nikidaly70

    ‘I’m a criminal mastermind,’ said the squirrel sticking the toupee on his head as disguise. Just then he gave a loud hiccup. ‘Oops!’ he said. ‘That’s what comes of eating too much crumble.’

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    1. That made me laugh. I can just imagine the squirrel in the photo you sent doing that!

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        nikidaly70

        Thanks, Esther. They’re such characters!

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  5. I hiccupped straight bourbon.  Yes, my case against the mastermind of the crime of the century crumbled on a word, becoming as useless as a toupee on a squirrel.  I poured another shot.

    *

    He thought himself a mastermind, his merest hiccup a stroke of genius, his real ideas god-like in meaning.  When the squirrel tore off his toupee, his façade crumbled briefly, and I took advantage.

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    1. Those made me laugh out loud. Looks like you had fun with them 😊

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      1. Yes, I tried to have fun with it. Glad they got a laugh from you 🙂

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    carolmiers

    The criminal mastermind walked away in broad daylight, the cash squirrelled away, a successful heist. Until there was a hiccup, when her toupee slipped, the disguise crumbled, then the Police chase began.

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    1. That’s a great story! Thank you, Carol.

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    cathywattam

    With my new phone, I tried to video the squirrel wearing a toupee but there was a slight hiccup. I’m no mastermind with technology and instead, deleted Auntie Susan’s prize apple crumble photo.

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    1. That’s just brilliant, Cathy 😊

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    squirreljan

    The plan he’d masterminded had gone without a hiccup.  He’d screeched, scaring the man so his toupee fell onto the bird table. The squirrel ran off and the magpie scoffed all the crumble.

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    1. Very funny. Thank you for that one.

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  9. One hiccup and off shot my toupee. Unfortunately I was camping in the woods and a squirrel carried it off up a tree. I crumble at the thought of appearing on Mastermind hairless.

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  10. Burt was a dating mastermind. A new toupee, the works! But, she didn’t call back. Maybe it was because he hiccuped and sprayed her with crumble at desert. He felt like a squirrel!!

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    1. That’s absolutely hilarious! Love it 😊

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      1. Thanks so much Esther. Glad you enjoyed it!!

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