Bite Size Writing Tips: Dynamic Dialogue Part Six

Here’s part six in my writing dialogue series. If you missed part one, click here. For part two, click here. For part three, you’ll find it here , for part four, click here and for part five, it’s here.

Now for part six:

At the end of a passage of speech, don’t add a full stop if you’re then assigning ownership. This makes the passage two separate sentences, which doesn’t make sense e.g.:

“Paul, just tell me what’s going on.” The headmaster said.

Instead of a full stop, add in a comma:

“Paul, just tell me what’s going on,” the headmaster said.

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9 responses to “Bite Size Writing Tips: Dynamic Dialogue Part Six”

  1. Always something that confuses me!

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    1. You’re not alone in this, Ritu!

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  2. I didn’t know this. Grammar is a huge weakness for me,

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    1. I’m glad you found it useful. A lot of people struggle with this so you’re not alone.

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  3. The little reminder of I AM A WRITER poster at the bottom of this post is a timely reminder to keep going. Thank you.

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    1. You’re very welcome. I love quotes like this. They keep you going.

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  4. Whoops – repetition of ‘reminder’! The inner editor looming large!

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  5. […] Here’s part seven in my writing dialogue series. Here are parts one, two, three, four, five and six. […]

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