Bite Size Writing Tips

Involve Your Reader

Not sure how to open your short story? Try addressing your reader directly. It instantly makes them feel part of your story. Here’s an example:

Just one more, that’s all I was going to take. You know that, don’t you? You understand. Well, they didn’t. And they wouldn’t listen. Looked at me like I was dirt.

In the opening to this monologue, see how you feel as if the character is appealing to you personally and how involved you already feel in their tale.

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12 responses to “Bite Size Writing Tips”

  1. Ooh… I love these bite-sized tips. Fab idea. Pulling the reader in immediately is crucial. I’ve never tried addressing the reader directly but it’s an interesting thought… 🙂

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    1. Thanks, Sarah. I like to experiment and to try different ways of writing a story 😃

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  2. This is an interesting idea, Esther. I have seen it used in books and stories.

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    1. I like different types of story opening; it’s good fun to have a play around with them 😊

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  3. Reblogged this on Author Don Massenzio and commented:
    Check out this great bite-size writing tip from this post on Esther Chilton’s blog.

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      1. You’re welcome.

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  4. Reblogged this on D.B. Mauldin and commented:
    Bite Size Writing Tips

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    1. Thank you so much 🙂

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  5. Hadn’t thought about that, but I can see why it’s engaging.

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    1. Thanks, Simon. It really is good to experiment with story openings 🙂

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      1. I must do that more.

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