Another Dash Of Flash

Looking at the title of one of the books on my shelf, the following story came to mind:

Escape

I stop, tears streaming down my cheeks. Soft whispers caress me, building in sound slowly, the harshness of the words with them. The snap of stiff wood to my right, a yell of triumph to my left.

Fingers of fear creep over me, prodding, pressing, pulling, refusing to leave me alone. My feet find movement and the relentless rain stabs at my mouth, my nose, my eyes.

I think of my pursuers. I know what they did to Annie; I know what they’ll do to me.

A shimmering light catches my eye. How can I have ended up back here? Pretty pools of sparkling blue dance on the water, mesmerising, motioning me forward. I’m sure I can see Annie. She is smiling, beckoning me.

Hands grab me. Rough, snatching handfuls of hair. The ducking stool awaits, but I am no longer afraid.    

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lost

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9 responses to “Another Dash Of Flash”

  1. Ooh this is great! I love the quick move from panic to acceptance. You make this look easy! 🙂

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    1. Thanks, Adam 🙂 How are things going with you?

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      1. You’re welcome 🙂 Things are going well, thanks. I’ve been heavily focused on Nanowrimo recently, and I’m loving it. I am still working on short stories as well, so there should be few more on the blog in the near future!

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      2. Great! Glad the writing is going well 🙂

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  2. wow – you have so great steps to arrive and reach to acceptance – so great!!

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    1. Thank you, Mihran 🙂

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  3. Wow, very tense. Great writing. So much meaning with such few words. “Ducking Stool” feels like such a loaded term.

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    1. Thank you for your comment 🙂

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  4. This is very well written, Esther. Though personally I found it a little puzzling.

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