Short Story – Invisible

I was delighted to have my short story ‘Invisible’ published over on Marsha Ingrao’s Always Write blog. I’d love you to head over for a read if you have time:

https://alwayswrite.blog/2026/01/27/story-chat-digest-invisible-by-esther-chilton

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13 responses to “Short Story – Invisible”

  1. It’s a very well written story. So touching and poignant.

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    1. Thank you, Sadje ❤️

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      1. You’re most welcome. 🤗

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  2. Such a great story, Esther. Well done!

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    1. Thank you, Darlene 🥰

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  3. I loved your story, Esther!

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    1. Thanks so much, Jan 🥰

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  4. I loved your story Esther ❤️

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    1. Thank you, Maggie ❤️

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  5. Breathtaking write, Esther. I left my comment over there.

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    Dear Esther,

    Thankyou very much for giving me the chance to read your story “Invisible”, and to introduce me to this new community of writers.

    I appreciated your story, with its challenging message, but I did suffer an uncomfortable twinge: some time ago I wrote a very similar story, inspired by the black street vendors here. I have it lined up for a 500-word competition.

    The parallels were really very striking! I attach it here, in case you’re curious to see it. (I have tweaked it here and there, I admit).

    The police, they say, don’t believe in coincidences but I think I do.

    Enjoy the weekend – in the rain, I hear.

    Best wishes,

    Susan

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