Can You Tell A Story In…

So, was this week your first week back to routine? I hope it’s gone well if so. Here’s your new story challenge.

Can you tell a story in 63 words using the following words in it somewhere:

  • NOODLES
  • CLINIC
  • SWAMP
  • DUNGAREES
  • OCTOGENARIAN
  • BARGAIN

The previous challenge was to write a story in 40 words using the following four words in it somewhere:

  • RESOLUTION
  • HUMAN
  • RAISINS
  • MOOD

Here are your brilliant stories:

Therapy Bits:

At dawn, the human council argued bitterly. Raisins spilled across the table, shifting the mood. After laughter and tears, a quiet resolution formed: forgive, share breakfast, rebuild trust together, as sunlight warmed hands, memories softened, and hope returned slowly home.

Sarah W:

Box of healthy raisins in hand, Tracy switched on the hi-fi and settled in to write her new year’s resolutions. She frowned. She thought she’d chosen a Human League CD, but “I’m in the mood for dancing” blared out instead.

My word (s):

On 1/1/2026, June made a resolution never to eat them again. She was in no mood for a repeat of the Christmas fallout of 2025. Remembering 20kgs of little raisins on her driveway still traumatised her. She was only human. 

Squirreljan:

My human’s resolution was to stop me begging at nibble time by only eating raisins with her evening tipple. She knew I will never eat them again after they caused my last sleepover at that devil vet. Bad mood – woof!

Sillyfrog’s Blog:

Grapes of Wrath

My New Year’s Resolution is to stop allowing raisins-YES RAISINS! – to haunt my every mood. Those sticky, wrinkly, little ubiquitous buggers have ‘dogged’ me since 2nd grade. Everyone had them…there was no place to hide… Must… Save… Humanity!

Kim Smyth:

Sally’s New Year’s resolution soured her good mood. It had to be done. Starting was hard.

She sat, eating raisins and cereal as she formulated her plan.

Turning on a YouTube Walking Program, she felt more human with every step.

Graeme Sandford:

“You say you want a resolution… well, you know…”

“Well, here in my car, I’m only human… Gary Human!”

“Ha! How about – I’m dancing in the moodlight.”

“Raisins to be cheerful, part 3!”

“Oh, that’s funny! I like that one.” 

John W. Howell:

My New Year’s resolution is to not join those human raisins at the pool thereby maintaining my youthful mood.

L Wie:

Forever Young?

The ripe grapes‘ mood dropped suddenly when humans sat down in the shadow of the grapevine and started eating raisins. The fruits spontaneously made the resolution to rather get eaten by a crow than get old and wrinkly like that!

Dawgy Daddy Responds:

Munching on oatmeal and raisins for breakfast this morning, it occurred to me that the human mood regarding making a New Year’s resolution was inimical to their well-being. I find the human will usually isn’t strong enough to accomplish this. 

Miriam Hurdle:

Human beings have mood swings. They’re apart from the far east to the far west. They float solo and don’t sync. A genius asks everyone to make a resolution to share raisins every day. They now live happily ever after.

The Ramblings of E. M. Kingston:

Schoolyard Bully

He always puts her in a bad mood.

There was no resolution for his broken human condition.

As he dangled the little box of raisins in front of her face, she thought she would deck him square in the gut.

Keep Calm & Drink Coffee:

Raisins don’t go well with coffee… so I had to find a solution.
I wasn’t in the mood to bake, but I tried making cookies anyway.
In the end, my kitchen looked like a battlefield.
Keep Calm… I’m only human

Christopher Farley:

Like any normal human being, come January the first I made a resolution. To go into business in the dried fruit sector. Very healthy, by all accounts.I couldn’t have been prouder when they unveiled the sign “Raisins the Roof”.

Susan Batten:

Despite his resolution, Joe ate too many raisins on New Year’s Eve (his version of the Spanish grapes). Being only human, he had a bad stomach next day, which put him in a terrible mood to start the new year.

Pensitivity101:

The committee passed a resolution that raisins would no longer be used in the cafeteria as a substitute for sugar.

Within weeks, the mood shifted as people began to feel more human now pips were no longer in their tea.

Murray Clarke:

What makes us human? The eternal question! And, with every New Year’s resolution, I contemplate how I can become a better person. This puts me in a reflective mood as I devour the last of the Christmas nuts and raisins.

The Afterlove Voice:

At midnight I made a resolution to stay bravely human, even when hope feels like dried raisins in the palm.

The sky boomed, the sea breathed, and the mood shifted: maybe fragile hearts can still choose sunrise after long nights.

Pictures Imperfect Blog:

Lost in Translation – a true story

“Kishmish!” I call for my sister whose name is Raisin which sounds stupid for a human. I’ve made a resolution to call her by the Farsi translation from now on and every time I do it is raisin’ the mood.

poetisinta:

Rory the Racoon

A raison-loving racoon named Rory enjoyed dancing on picnic tables, demanding raisons like royalty. Humans, confused but amused, obliged. On New Year’s Day Rory made a resolution – to eat more raisins – hardly difficult but it did significantly improve his mood.

Christine Mallaband-brown:

Resolution, a method of trying to improve your life on the coming year..
But human nature has risks. You tell yourself not to eat the raisins, which could lift your mood, but you eat them and they are rabbit droppings!

Lily’s Corner:

Only One

My resolution is to put grapes on a string and hang them across my kitchen window. It’s only human nature and only an arms length away for when I’m in the mood for a quick homemade raisin snack.

Ann Edall-Robson:

The entertainment committee for the Grape Festival announced a resolution to improve the opening ceremonies. 

1970’s music by The Raisins was needed. 

Human shockwaves of excitement spread. People searched attics and basements. The mood for the festival was set. 

Teleportingweena:

The Singing Raisins group always thought they were human. People loved them, going to their concerts, throwing little raisins at the stage. They made a resolution to never break up, lifting the mood of everyone. Their motto – wrinkled is cool.

The Bag Lady:

It’s my new resolution.
Oh?
Yes, I’m in no mood to hear that commercial ever again, so the tv is off!
What commercial?
The ones with “human” raisins singing.
That’s old, where’d you hear it?
It’s saved on my Walkman.

Treehugger:

My New Year Resolution is to eat a snack box of raisins daily, for lunch. Hopefully, this practice will put me in a better mood. I strive to be a decent human being ,but hunger makes me an aggressive monster.

Mark Fraidenberg:

The Aftermath

Three days since the basement. Her daughter safe. The killer gone.

Torres sat in the empty precinct, eating raisins from an evidence bag he’d left behind. Her mood: hollow. Her resolution: absolute.

He’d proven she was human.

Now she’d prove humans hunt back.

The Elephant’s Trunk:

On Being Responsible

My New Year’s resolution: eat healthier.
Day one, I’m munching raisins like a responsible human.
They’re even in my salad.
Day two, I realize raisins are just old, disappointed grapes.
My mood plummets.
I order pizza.
Resolution abandoned.
Mood elevated.

Andy Cripps:

A Cure to Sadness?

I heard a rumour once: That the resolution to human sadness, may or may have not been, a single loaf of bread sprinkled with raisins.

Both mood and the warm smell of baking rose so jovially—brioche of the soul.

Utahan15:

cry season

resolute new year

raison d faire

am i human

i am

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32 responses to “Can You Tell A Story In…”

  1. […] Can You Tell A Story In… – Esther Chilton […]

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  2. pasta hasta

    noodles swamp me

    a clinic

    of what a bargain

    the ramen bag give

    til im an octogenarian

    in my blue soiled and stained

    jeans dungarees

    the mirth

    gave birth

    to the places

    and spaces

    of my manic autistic

    miasmas!

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  3. The Octogenerian decided to buy a dungaress at a bargain store near the swamp. She stopped there on the way to the clinic but the high pruces made her pressure shoot up.To bring her blood pressure down she stopped at the nearby Chinese restaurant and had a bowl of noodles. The salty noodles just didn’t help with her pressure! No more clinic visit!

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    1. Keep away from salty noodles! 😂 Very good 😊

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  6. I like that quote about bargains! Here is my entry :

    https://wp.me/p3RE1e-nwb

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  7. I love all the entries!

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    1. Thanks, Kymber. Glad you enjoyed them.

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  8. Sarah sat eating her NOODLES, it was lunchtime in the CLINIC.
    She was in charge of the wildlife centers SWAMP area.
    Soon she was putting on her DUNGAREES.
    It was time to inspect the OCTOGENARIAN turtles:, they had been a BARGAIN because they were mutant ninja ones.
    Sarah wondered why they wore masks? And headscarves? Maybe that was the mutation? Time would tell…

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    1. That is a fab story in those words 🥰

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  9. It was no use. No matter how much Shirley breathed in, there was no way those dungarees would fasten around her newly plump octogenarian frame. They’d swamped her former rather spindly form when she first bought them for the clinic’s inaugural Bob the Builder themed party. But not any more. Endless gorging on bulk buy bargain noodles from Costco had taken its toll.

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    1. That’s priceless 😂 I love it!

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      1. Thanks Esther. Bob the Builder immediately sprang to mind when I thought of dungarees 😄

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    1. You’ve made that into a fab story 😊

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      1. Thank you so much 🌷 Happy you liked it 😊

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    1. You made me laugh out loud! Great story 😊

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  10. Thank you for the challenge Esther. Here’s mine.

    Dungarees, Diagnoses, and Discount Wisdom

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    1. Wow. You’ve made that into a great story.

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      1. Thank you. I loved the set of words.

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  11. That was fun! And here it is:

    Louis was an octogenarian, imprisoned by his children in a bargain clinic. Escape was going to be difficult. It was in the middle in a swamp. They had even taken away his belt. But Louis was resourceful. He took some spaghetti noodles and threaded them through the slings making a decent pair of dungarees. He’d pass as a janitor. The break-out was on!

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    nikidaly70

    The clinic was swamped by pensioners all waiting for hearing tests.
    ‘What’s going on?’ I asked in astonishment.
    ‘It’s a bargain!’ cried an octogenarian excitedly. ‘Buy a hearing aid and get a free pack of noodles! And even better, they come ready cooked!’ He tugged a limp handful from the front of his dungarees. ‘You don’t even have to put your teeth in!’

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  13. After eating at the bargain noodle joint, I just managed to make it to the Clinic. Being an Octogenarian in dungarees I had about as much sway as a swamp boat driver, but did get seen. A king size Kaopectate to go and good as new.

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  14. Before anyone cries foul I want you all to know that psychopomp really is a word.

    ****
    (More words from me
    that make sixty-three)

    He sits outside the clinic
    And thinks of way back when
    A young man with a future
    Was not this octogenarian
    Now draped in dirty dungarees
    Just trying to survive
    A bowl of instant noodles
    Barely keeping him alive
    Arthritis in the bargain
    His world a rotting swamp
    Just waiting for redemption
    From a passing psychopomp

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