Can You Tell A Story In…

Happy Thursday! Here’s your new story challenge:

Can you tell a story in 50 words? You must use the following words somewhere in the story:

  • LIST
  • TWIN
  • COMA
  • PIE
  • FAIRY

Last week’s prompt was to tell a story in 20 words using the following three words in it somewhere:

  • TICKET
  • WIND
  • BEAR

Kim Smyth went a bit over the word limit, but it’s a great story:

The bear lumbered along through the forest looking for a snack before it was time to hibernate. The wind whistled through the trees and soon he smelled what might be his meal ticket. Sure enough, as he came into the clearing, he saw a pup tent. The bear sniffed and approached the pup tent slowly, listening for human noises. Pushing his head through the opening, he spied an empty sleeping bag and a cooler. Growling in anticipation, he opened the cooler, found a drink and tore the top off with his sharp teeth. Drinking it down, he roared with dissatisfaction. Bear needed food! Lumbering his way back out of the tent, he saw the pan sitting on the campfire. Score! He stuck his pointed snout into the pan which held some yummy smelling meat, and roared again as the heat burned his muzzle. Running away and growling in disgust, the bear was back on the hunt for an elusive snack.

Marcus Power:

The blistering wind was relentless as I joined the ticket queue. All one could do was grin and bear it.

Chris Page:

The artiste couldn’t bear the ticket touts who would wind him up as he stepped out of the tour bus.

Christine Mallaband-Brown:

The lottery ticket was in the bears mouth, then the wind caught it. Honestly, that’s how I lost my fortune!

Trent’s World:

The girl with kaleidoscope eyes calls, I answer. A bear waves from the turnstile. The wind whips my ticket away.

Ticket in hand, a bear lunged. I dropped everything and ran like the wind. Train missed, that’s why I’m late.

Darlene:

Sara clutched the ticket tightly. She wanted to fly like the wind to places unknown and maybe see a bear.

Lance Greenfield:

Rupert Bear held the winning ticket.
Alas, the wind blew strong and managed to nick it.

Sarian Lady:

Mugged
Ticket gone.
Pedalling like the wind, knocked me down.
Can’t bear to live in this place.
Must get home.

Ruth Scribbles:

The giant black bear caught the ticket with his teeth, when the furious wind tore it out of my hand.

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20 responses to “Can You Tell A Story In…”

  1. List, twin, coma, pie, fairy.
    The president repeated back the random words to the interviewer.

    See, he said, I have perfect recall!

    We won the election, I need to be in charge. I will stop world war 2, I will fight Stalin. I’m a stable genius!

    Leaf, twig, comma, cake, firefly!

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      1. I’ll let you off!

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      2. It’s hard trying to count on my phone, sometimes I just hit the send button by accident!

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      3. That’s your excuse 🤣

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    1. Very tropical, as the chief orange fruit basket said to the Marxist bat fairy!

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  2. That’s a hard one!
    Having used your five words, we only have 45 left to compose our stories.
    A fifty-five word limit would have been MUCH more reasonable!
    🤣

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  3. The tooth fairy whispered into the comatose child’s ear.
    “Listen! That magpie on your windowsill has his beady eye on us. As soon as I go, you must wake up and hide the coin that I left under your pillow. He already stole your twin brother’s reward.”

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    1. Very interesting! I want to know more!

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      1. A five word prompt becomes a fifty word starter for a 500 word flash fiction prompt for a 5000 word short story! 🙂

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  4. The twin who was in a coma heard the fairy whisper in her ear, if you wake up, I’ll put you on the list for a special kind of pie. I’ll send it to your mama, any kind you dream of! The baby’s eyes began to flutter open. Coconut cream!

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      1. Thank you! I used my word counter today!

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  5. The ingredients’ list for fairy pie required comatose twins, skinned and seared over a hot stove. It recommended cooking with Siberian magic dust and garlic. Conan hoped his efforts were appreciated; finding fresh fairies in October was hard. With those in the oven, he turned to the steamed pixie pudding…

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    1. Ooh, fairy pie. My favourite!

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  6. Jenny was making a list of goodies for Christmas. I was making a giant mince pie. My twin sister Sara precariously balanced on a ladder,stretched to place the fairy on the tree. Suddenly, a crash. She ended up in a coma, in hospital. Lists,pies and fairies all forgotten.

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    1. A great story, but so sad!

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